Powerful and Affectionate

It's a bit long and I couldn't read it all. The article reads very smoothly and the writing is pretty good. It also has a plot, suspense and foreshadowing. But why is the book's data bad? This requires you to calm down and think about it yourself. Keep writing, sum up your experience, learn lessons, and hope you can write works that satisfy you and readers will like. Goodbye!

1. Seven years in the first two sentences of the introduction... I thought of the seven-year itch at first glance, but... I don't know what the seven-year itch is~ I just heard this saying somewhere, maybe a TV series! Really? Can't remember! Going to the fourth sentence... The idea is confirmed. It seems that I have to go to Baidu to find out what seven years is... 2. The first two chapters, the chapter names are very beautiful and I like them. Let's look at the middle of the third chapter. Before that, I felt uncomfortable watching it! When I was young, my parents got divorced and quarreled every day, so my childhood was gone, haha. It was very depressing to watch, even if I fell off the building... But what happened later? Rebirth? Is this science fiction? I... My thoughts were suddenly pulled back⊙▽⊙. But it's okay, maybe going back to the past can change something, maybe it will only get worse. Who knows? I don't know, take your time and take a look! Read a book, observe a person, and do something. 3. There is a sense of immersion, but... It seems to be a bit short of the amazing feeling that makes me feel? The beginning attracted me, but the later part was obviously lacking. Just take your time, just take your time. Anyway, I didn't see the later part. Maybe there will be something surprising to me later on? Right! 4. There is a lack of characterization of the characters, and there seems to be too much language. The depiction of Jiang Qian makes me feel a little confused, and I feel a little indifferent to her... Let's encourage each other, come on ٩( 'ω' )و A word for you: For the woodcutter's axe, ask the tree for the ax handle. The tree gave it to him. This is an excerpt from Rabindranath Tagore's Birds. It is meaningless and profound...

"Quan Qing Zuo Qing Shen" is a present-day novel wearing a vest of the future. The introduction is too brief, so it cannot cover the middle and later stages of the article. Personally, I feel that the relationship in the early stage is relatively delicate, because the author likes profound words! But the plot does not focus on love. The separation of the male and female protagonists in the first three chapters is to get together better! There is a little school life in the early stage, but she will soon enter Jiang Qian's career. Because the author hopes that the pattern can be bigger, not just limited to the love between the male and female protagonists. Probably two people, growing up with each other, and finally uncovering some conspiracies together (the conspiracies are mainly in the real world, that is, the future) because the background is based on the future, similar to time travel and rebirth, but not! It is mainly about modern times. The heroine is a people's policeman with a gentle personality (so there will be some cases in the middle to show the strength of the heroine). The male protagonist is a president, but not a domineering one! (He is the most powerful one) It's not his identity, but that he knew something in advance and made some plot changes. This book actually witnesses the stories of some supporting characters. Their growth and unfortunate encounters promote the development of the story. For example. Song Jiawen, who had ill intentions to harm the male protagonist, Shen Zhiyi, who suddenly fell in love with a boy, Song Qingru, who was carefree, Xu Canyang, who came to Jiangcheng with a purpose, Ji Lin, who let his sister take the blame and went to jail, Li Yuan and Gan Qiao, who died inexplicably and tragically... In the middle, maybe in the form of a dream, the story is described. It is a tragedy to write about the separation and reunification of the male and female protagonists in ancient times and the Republic of China. Because the first two did not successfully get together, there was a third modern entanglement. There are always some people in the book who disappear after writing, but in this book, these people are just the protagonists and supporting characters in every step of the journey. The people you must pass through are the ones you cannot keep. This book mainly starts from Jiang Qian's perspective, but in the middle you will find that it is more about the different fates of different people through Jiang Qian's perspective.

The book cover is very nice and attractive, and the first few pictures are very well written, but I always feel that Chen Jiaye does not look like a scumbag, and seems to have some difficulties. Come on, I have invested in you and will continue to support you!

1. To be honest, it was very difficult to get along with female fans at the beginning, especially Xianyan. I came in by mistake at the beginning, and I didn't want to just quit like this. At least I wrote one or two books seriously. No matter what my achievements are, it can be regarded as an explanation for myself. 2. Every time I see someone voting for me, I want to vote back, but with my trumpet, I only have 4 votes (male channel plus female channel), so there are always some people who can't vote back, and then I feel so embarrassed and afraid that I will be angry. I think to myself: Oh, I will vote for you. I voted, but you didn't reply to me, hum, I'm angry, I won't play with you anymore 😂 3. In the days when there are no readers, I want to support and encourage each other with everyone, but I have been busy with exams recently, so some comments may be careless, and some of them are too late to reply. I hope everyone can forgive me! 4. In short, it is not easy for newbies. I hope everyone can work hard together. If you have any questions, you can ask them directly!

The big number is liberated. Thank you all for your help for a month and for not giving up on me because of the trouble of finding my book 🤭🤭

I'd better use the old one, I'm too lazy to do it

I felt like I was shocked. I read a new book and found that her data was super good. It was the kind that really had readers and was popular. The interaction between readers and authors is very cordial. I think my writing is really not good, and it can be seen from the beginning. This book should be finished [at the end of August], because I want to have perfect attendance at the end of the month 🤭🤭 Because I didn't save the manuscript, I missed a lot of things during this time because of writing the book, I still have to study hard when school starts in September. Thank you for your support during this period and the following time. This is also my plan from the beginning. Also, my big size has not been released from the dark room yet😂😂 I can't think about it anymore, the more I think about it, the worse it gets

Jiang Qian

Hey, he was released? 😁

Hey everyone, little cutie, Li Yuan is online! The tragic supporting actor will always live in the memory because he is dead, hahahahaha

The god-like author can appear in every corner of the starting point all the time, and you can see him everywhere. Is this the legendary peerless master? I heard that women's videos are more beautiful, so I'll like them first and then continue to watch them. Come on!

It's so difficult (✪▽✪) to portray the character Jiang Qian 😂 I don't know how to portray it

Rose

Small courtyard

Internet Pictures Jiang Gui (Internet Picture Intrusion and Deletion)

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Welcome to "I am running the underworld on Journey to the West"

Uncle Dog㊗️Happy New Year's Day everyone, and Happy New Year!

Finished? 😜I don't even know