Douluo's Personal Pendant

I am Shen Nong, I have tried hundreds of poisons without dying, and I despise the poisons in the world. Now, Nong Guan has returned from this book. Every time I think about the medicinal properties of this book, I feel very tight in my chest. I know that Nong Xiao underestimated the world. This book can harm Nong's life. Fortunately, Nong can resist this poison for a while, so I wrote this book to tell all Taoist friends: Leave it alone. It is enough to burn incense, comfort farmers, and encourage farmers.

The author's creativity is good, and the plot is okay, but there are a few problems: 1. The plot after the protagonist runs away from home has no purpose. After seeing a blacksmith shop and asking about the situation, he spent all the money on a bet with someone, and then he has to participate in some weapon refining competition. Why? The author didn't show any meaning at all, it just felt like he wanted to be hostile and hostile to Wuhundian. 2. Notting City is just a small city. The author set up a blacksmith shop owner to be a Soul Saint. You can't look down on the Soul Saint just because the Soul Saint is useless in the late Douluo period. The Soul Saint is also well-fed in Tiandou City. Tiandou City Apart from Poison Douluo, Bone Douluo, Sword Douluo, there are no other Titled Douluo on the surface and the two Titled Douluo beside Qian Renxue. You will say that there are other Titled Douluo, I admit it, but the existence of Titled Douluo should not be mentioned as Tian Dou. In Douluo, they are all at the top level. The Soul Douluo and Soul Sage below are either the dean of the school or the guest minister. Most of the teachers in Lanba Academy are just Soul Lords and Soul Kings. It can be seen that Soul Sage can be considered first-class in Tiandou City. Such a person would open a blacksmith shop in a small town, and the production process of soul guides has been lost. Although everyone behind Douluo 1 seems to have one, it has indeed been lost. The reason why soul guides in Douluo 2 are prosperous is from the Sun and Moon Continent. 3. When the protagonist casually enters a blacksmith shop, someone recognizes Tang Hao, and then the protagonist cancels the disguise. Isn't it too hasty? When people ask the protagonist, he just answers the same question. He really has never been beaten by society. 4. The son of the protagonist Tang Hao (although he picked it up, but Wuhun Palace doesn't care about it), the first soul ring is a thousand years, and the second soul ring is a hundred thousand years. He participated in the competition held by Wuhun Palace without any way to hide the age of the soul rings. Moreover, the protagonist ran away from home and used system props to disguise himself. Tang Hao didn't know that the protagonist was in Notting City, so there was no way to save him. Whether the protagonist is looking for death or not, regardless of whether the protagonist is Tang Hao's son or not, once this soul ring configuration is revealed, the protagonist will be killed on the spot by the people of Wuhun Palace if he does not join Wuhun Palace.

I just want to know what is the use of the protagonist's innate level 20? It stands to reason that with twin martial souls plus innate level 20 soul power, even a twelve-year-old pig can reach level 30 or above, right? The twenty-level innate soul power is used to show the protagonist's high talent, but at the age of twelve, it is actually at the same level as Shrek's innate soul power, which is not even full soul power? The protagonist hasn't even been promoted to level ten in the past six years? I feel like the protagonist is completely unworthy of the setting of level 20 innate soul power.

I couldn't hold on and died from the poison From the first few chapters, it was obvious that this was a novice novel. When I saw the random spending of diamonds to improve the blacksmith at the beginning of Chapter 8, I planned to read it as a mindless novel. Unexpectedly, I couldn't even hold on to Chapter 8. Is this an adult soul? 1. No financial management ability (use all the diamonds to improve a blacksmith's ability which is not of much use. Everyone in the Tang family is a blacksmith. The protagonist used up all the diamonds in order to make money, maybe also to cause a conflict with Wuhun Palace. By the way, Just pretending to be B) 2. No basic vigilance (I have the ability to disguise my identity, but the disguise is lifted after just saying a few words. Can anyone in another world believe it casually?) 3. Things confuse me. (When I first went to the blacksmith shop, I thought I wanted to find a job to support my daily expenses while I was in school. Unexpectedly, the protagonist actually said it was not for money. I was immediately confused. It was not for money. You can do whatever you want. Are you pretending to be B? Are you a holy mother who wants to save a dilapidated shop when you see it? It feels like it is written like this to forcefully draw out the contradictions with Wuhundian. Otherwise, why? Why don't you just go to another blacksmith shop?) After that, I briefly looked at the chapter title, and a considerable part of it was describing the weapon refining competition. I always felt that it was a very familiar routine of pretending to be a slap in the face. Then I thought about the conflict with the Wuhun Palace, and I thought about it again. It was simply, I had no desire to read any more But I still want to say, author, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง I support you in spirit! Looking forward to seeing better works from you in the future💪💪 Excuse me, farewell. 👋👋

Why are the martial soul settings of many Douluo fandoms unreasonable? It is obvious that martial souls are determined by blood, mutated or modified the day after tomorrow, but many protagonists have ordinary parents, and martial souls are not related to mutation. The result is outrageous, and martial souls become particularly awesome. When the protagonist's father is Tang Hao, you must at least give him a Clear Sky Hammer, otherwise all three views will be lost!

It seems we are all awesome.

I suddenly discovered that there are still people investing in my book. Isn't my update just a gift of money? Is there any investment expert who can guide me on how to invest?

Why are Douluo fans all King B? There are a lot of them, and one link is a thousand. No wonder it is not popular. The setting of the master is nothing.

What do you think is the use of writing this innate level 20? Six years is not as good as Tang San's innate soul power.

The front is okay, I really have some brains. After Zhu Zhuqing came in behind, I really licked it. I really felt disgusted. I was really speechless when I licked it. I really licked the dog until the end. You haven't seen a woman for so long. It was really crazy. It made my scalp numb. Really, is this necessary?

I couldn't stand the first chapter! Tang San traveled through time as an adult! Before he founded the Tang Sect, his wife Xiao Wu didn't even teach him martial arts! ! !

Oh my God, Tang San fucked Tang Hao again

The writing is inexplicable! The author's thinking is unconstrained! Write whatever comes to mind! Let me tell you that the author is awesome! Don't worry about the plot, just show how awesome the protagonist is! 😰😰😰😰😰

I think the male protagonist was a primary school student in his previous life and didn't know what to hide. I was also drunk. He told others all his secrets and wasted diamonds to upgrade some useless things. I was not short of money. I don't know why I wasted diamonds on that blacksmith. Moreover, the soul guide in the original Douluo book has been lost long ago. Here, anyone can make a soul guide. I have no objection to some changes in the fanfic, but if it changes something that can affect the main plot, it would be boring.

Is this the end? I can't continue writing or the author doesn't want to write anymore, that's it, I have to send the blade 😡😡😡😡😡! ! ! ! ! !

The level suppression is too powerful. You are born at level 20 and can be promoted to level 10 in six years.

I didn't expect a strong and violent person to be a dog licker.

This book is full of poisonous points. There are too many typos to mention. The plot is also a mess. The plot of the original work has been changed. There is a section in the entrance exam that is different from the original work. The reason why Xiao San and Zhao Wuji had a one-on-one duel was because Xiao Wu's charm soul skill failed and was counterattacked. But here, nothing happened after Xiao Wu failed.

12 Years old, 1.8 Meters tall. Did you grow up on urea? Is it convenient for you to be so big if you force yourself to be that big?

So why is this book so poisonous? There are also recommendations

It's just following the plot, it's not good to watch

The title of the book was changed to "Time Travel Douluo Becomes a Blacksmith" which is more in line with the plot. 👎🏿

Unexpectedly, it's like this again

I don't understand why his mother is the Blue Silver Emperor and his father is the Clear Sky Hammer. What's wrong with you? Has Tang Hao been cheated on? I've read 10 fanfics and 8 of them were cheated. It's okay if you tell us whether we are biological or picked up. You're very irritating.

Release a boss and then travel to other worlds? And then the same Douluo? ? ?

Your magic cat is hanging on someone else, why don't you slap it yourself?