Tongtian Craftsman Immortal

Thanks to {"NickName":"refute the thief party","UserId":342302673}'s comments, which made me understand where my book still falls short. The description of psychological activities is not vivid enough, but... I don't know how to revise the text, so I will try to revise it slowly while maintaining daily updates. I published this book without revising it, mainly because there were too few people around me who could give opinions, and I was not strong enough. If you have any other better suggestions for this book, please comment.

It has finally passed the review. It will be 3000+ in one week starting today. Whether it will be 6000+ in a month depends on everyone. If there are 100 people reading the book, I will get 6000+ in two chapters a day.

Collected it, the writing is good, keep it up, come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Although I have been playing alone, I have met a group of like-minded friends. With their help, I have slowly learned more and my writing skills have improved faster. I believe I can write more exciting stories for you in the future.

The novel is very graphic and the author is very attentive

I thought it was pretty good in passing, not a stupid article, but I hope it can be written more excitingly. The fighting is not exciting enough, and the meaning is still unfinished.

Communication Post The coming of "mutual communication"

Now that I'm writing, looking back, I realize what I'm writing about? The characters are well written, but the story development is not arranged well. However, the character design can be compensated by adding plot, and the plot development... Many people said it was too slow and too bland. Do you really want to see the fighting scenes that much? Or... I hope someone can give me some advice on how to save my book.

I have found the problem, and I am taking the time to revise the article. I hope readers will not give up.

The architecture is good. The language can be more detailed, the prompts for speaking and thinking need not always be said and thought, and the story rhythm can be more compact.

It feels like I'm on a single player 🤫

I feel like you have grown and improved a lot. It's not easy.

The author's title is very good and attractive to read, and the structure (idea, etc.) Of the book is very exciting 👍👍👍 However, some character dialogues and some subtleties are not handled well enough. It is recommended that the dialogues be concise and direct so that it will not be too embarrassing to read. (Maybe the content and title of the book are a little different from what I imagined. I don't really like this slightly bland plot, sorry.) Come on! ✊✊✊ (The above is only my personal opinion and for reference only. I also recommend Haihan🙏😃 It is recommended that you delete it after reading it. I feel that my review is not very good, I am sorry)

It's been so long, you've only changed so much