Millennium Secret Words

It's not a criticism, it's just that you said it's about an immortal palace, so it's better to make it more fantasy. If it's slow, it should get straight to the point and highlight the theme. Like the Ten Deadly Sins or something, it's best to find cases that have been over the years and adapt them, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Don't pay attention to the comments that make you feel disappointed, come on, voted. Someone is watching.

Suspense is suitable for fast entry, slow development, and finally reaching the climax. The rendering of the scene environment and the interaction of the game in the mind are the highlights. The beginning of the book is too light, and there is no eye-catching point about who the protagonist is. The most important thing is the damn first person...

The most important thing about suspense is logic and atmosphere rendering. Come on!

It's very well written, keep up the good work

Um. . . . You can take a look at Lanke Qiyuan for reference. To be honest, slow down, most chapters have too much speculation

I've read a few chapters. It's okay. I'll put it on the bookshelf first.

The vote for adding bookshelf has been cast! I hope the author can do better in terms of environment, psychological activities, and reversal. For example: Due to the bus tripping, all the lights in the entire company building have been turned off. I can only move forward slowly by the faint moonlight. "Go down two floors and you will reach the control room. As long as the lights are turned on, you will be fine." I am very upset at the moment. I have been afraid of walking at night since I was a child, so I have tried my best to keep myself calm. "Don't be afraid... There are no ghosts in this world... No ghosts" . 4F Continue going downstairs... 3F Continue going downstairs Suddenly, a bright light at the corner of the corridor caught my attention... The light flickered on and off, flickering unsteadily. Could it be that there are other employees in the company who are not off work? Is there anyone else at this moment? Isn't it a female ghost or something like that? I suddenly stopped when I thought of this! What the hell! I have read too many horror novels! Then I recited silently several times in my heart: "There are no ghosts in this world... There are no ghosts..." (1000 words of hesitation here) Adjust your breathing... And decide to step forward to see what's going on... If you are a colleague, you will have plenty of company. The strange thing is that as soon as I stepped out, the flickering light stopped flickering... As soon as I took my foot back... The bright light started flickering again. "Holy crap, who is here to play a prank?" Forget it! I'm not going! I was so angry that I decided to ignore the light. It was definitely not because I was afraid! But because I weighed the left and right, I felt that it was more important to go to the control room first, and turning on the lights was the first priority! Safety first after all! So I continued going downstairs... 3F Huh? Did I just walk through 3F? Continue going downstairs... 3F Huh? Is the sign on this floor also broken? Continue downstairs... 3F! Suddenly turned around! Look upstairs! 8F! I was suddenly shocked! Quickly lie down on the railing! Look downstairs! Minus 18F! My eyes suddenly widened! My palms are sweating! The heart is beating wildly! Can't keep calm anymore! At this moment... If I look carefully at a mirror in the corridor... I will find that behind me, there is a pale-faced long-haired woman... Slim, with ragged white clothes, At this moment, she slowly stretched out her arms and grabbed the back of my neck... It was an arm full of blood stains... At the same time, she also said: This is the end of fighting on the street! [Inspired by reading the author's book😭 Pick up the pen and let's start writing together!

Already hidden, please add bookshelf and hide each other

I basically don't watch suspense, but please give it a try.

Already collected, commented, voted and cheered each other on.

After reading it, to be honest, I haven't written down the terrifying, step-by-step feeling. It's like scratching an itch, but I just can't scratch it.

Why don't you sign a contract? Or do you think Qidian won't sign a tomb robbing book like this now?