Yin Yang Lu's Immortal Way

After skipping through a few chapters, I found that most of the chapters were almost just flowing dialogue between characters from beginning to end. There was not enough description of the scenes, plots, and emotions to set off the dialogue. Because the words did not convey the meaning, the article was boring and uncomfortable to read. It was obvious that the author put a lot of effort into writing, but his literary talent was not good, so it needs improvement! The above is just my personal opinion, thank you!

I think the dialogue is okay. When changing people, you can say who is who or where they are. Suddenly changing people makes me feel confused.

It's really a no-brainer, the dialogue is all dialogue.