I Clock in and Sign in All the Worlds

Give it up, I am convinced by this sentence, the first chapter is a mess written about time travel! No need to watch! Looking confused

Author, you need to change Chapter 8. You should remove the word "said" from the first sentence. There is a paragraph that should be said like this. It makes no sense!

The problem is that you pick up a watermelon and throw away a sesame. Every time he fights, he uses new moves. He just absorbs a lot of energy from Bei Ming Shen Gong and doesn't use it anymore. After learning so many martial arts, he fights back and forth with just the few moves he just learned. . Talents who use the system to waste

I said, author, have you read the article you wrote? You, the author, are really good at it. Either there is one more word, one less word, or your use of the word is not very good.

The system is conscious... The scariest thing... There is another person living in the mind...