My First Love Lives Next Door

05 First of all, praise me. The opening chapter is very life-like. Isn't this how bitter college students ask for offers... I cried As I read on, the author's ability to speak now is gradually revealed. He introduces the basic characters in a few words, and the scenes appear natural and great. Furthermore, the relaxed and pleasant writing style makes me feel that it is not watery at all... Hahaha, come on Then point out some minor shortcomings. The author's plot feels a bit monotonous, maybe he can add some jokes to supplement it? Secondly, there are a lot of words like 'Hey hey hey' and 'Xing Xing Xing' 🥺. Although they are part of the character image, I always feel that these modal particles are too boring and insufficient to express a lively and outgoing personality. Of course, these shortcomings are just what I say as an obsessive-compulsive reader, hahahaha, the author can ignore them. In short, it is a good book among contemporary marriage and love articles 🌹 It's really great! Come on and update, call me for first order, permanent collection! (The votes are gone today, vote tomorrow 😃)

Thanks to all the cute little crabs 😚 Your support is my biggest motivation~ Let's work hard together~❤️

Dear brothers, sisters and brothers, Orange and the editor-in-chief's application has been successful. It will be released on 6.23~ Two updates will be released on the same day😂 and then one update as usual Because Orange is writing a book, but also has to learn about exam life, so Thank you for your understanding hehe After taking the exam in early July, Orange will write more and save the manuscripts (´-ω-`) In August, there will be two updates a day ❤️ (because Orange, a little bastard, also wants to have perfect attendance 🐷)

Now let's explain an extended meaning Ha Leng Qingqiu Ye Zhiqiu (One leaf knows autumn, and Ye Zhiqiu implies that Ye You's father knows Ye You's mother very well! Even the name is very sweet 🤭)

Already rewarded 500, emmm, I understand

I read a lot of romance novels when I was in junior high school 😁, please keep up the good work

I was the first one, sitting in the front row with a small bench 🐷

It's a sweet daily article, and the introduction is very tempting. When I saw it, I congratulated the editor first. I feel that every character created by the author is very loving. Friends who like healing will definitely like this style of writing, because there are not too many. I hope that the plot will have ups and downs and not be too monotonous 🤭🤭

I'm here for business again😵😵

Oh, are you back? I saw your like 😏

Congratulations on the launch 😄

As expected of a contracted author, the writing is very good. I was so sweet as soon as I read it. The sweet article makes people feel good and has a good grasp of the characters. The agent made me laugh when I read it 😂 All in all, it is a good book.

Da Da's writing is quite good, very sweet ~ and very doting. I don't like to watch abuse, but I like Da Da's writing style. The story is engaging and the writing is excellent. All in all, this is a very good novel, I hope you will continue to update it, keep up the good work. I wish you can become a god soon and realize your dreams. 😁😁😁 Come on, little sister (broken sound)

Looks good! The beginning is very down-to-earth, simple and interesting, and I particularly like the heroine's character. The language has a sense of life and is not awkward to read, and the author's characters stand out with just a few words. I really like sweet stories, especially sweet stories that are about daily life. Coupled with the independence of the heroine, it couldn't be better. Come on!

Ah ah ah, it's late tonight. I'm here.

I have been reading Guyan for a long time, and I occasionally read it today. I finished it in one breath, and the plot is still very smooth. I am very happy just having fun.

Heehee, welcome to this house! ! When you come to this sweet house, don't think about running away (´-ω-`) Tangtang is ready, sweet, sweet!

This book is really good It's so cute and I love it I'll keep it for now, I'm too busy recently I'll support it first

Happy Orange Festival😁

Finished with flowers🙂

Happy Double Day🌸🌸🌸~

There are thousands of flavors of love, but only sweetness can nourish the heart the most. Memories are like old wine, the expectation when you collect it is the most satisfying when you open it.

Orange, let me see you🌹

From Dianquan: Well, I rarely watch female videos, so I felt a little awkward when I first started watching them because I subconsciously thought they were male videos. But after I changed them later, I seemed to understand more about girls, haha. The writing style is delicate and can bring out the flavor of the most ordinary word of life. Come on, the author!

Finished with flowers🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸😊

Finish spreading flowers🌹

An unexpected ending, scattering flowers 🌸

Why isn't it updated? 🤔