Douluo's Holy Sword User

Let me talk about my opinions on some Douluo. Of course, this is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. 1. Follow the original work and the same school as Tang San. In my opinion, this is actually the safest one for everyone (except for the system, of course. After all, the system will directly cheat you or not, it doesn't matter what you like.) Suppose you traveled to Douluo Continent and had no system but the original work in your mind. To be honest, you really weren't popular with Tang San. You said you should go to Wuhun Palace? Well, you must have a certain amount of talent to go to Wuhun Hall. If you have talent, you don't know who will teach you. There will definitely be a lot of intrigues in forces like Wuhun Hall, and whether you can survive is a question. As for Tang San, it can be said that as long as you don't waste a little talent and have a smooth journey before facing the Wuhun Palace, there will be no problem. You said that you can use your foresight to go to the fairy grass in the Sunset Forest? Whether you can enter or not is still a question. Can you enter Dugubo's medicine garden if you want to? Apart from the fairy grass that appears in the original work, what else do you know? Some are poisonous, some are not poisonous, and you don't know what effect they have. Without this knowledge, you don't know how you could die. 2. Apprenticeship to a master, there are actually two ways to say this. One is to learn about soul beasts and martial souls. After all, you said you want to say that you have a complete understanding of martial souls based on the few words about soul rings and martial souls in the original book. This is completely impossible. The second option is not to worship, but to follow Tang San and learn more or less about soul beasts. The knowledge of soul beasts and martial souls is absolutely indispensable. If you don't know which soul beast matches your soul ring, even if you have a Pangu Ax martial soul, it will be useless. You just don't know how to match it. It's just like you don't know how to dress up when playing LOL. You are obviously a warrior and if you dress like a mage, no matter how strong the hero is, he will become useless. In fact, it would be the safest choice to travel to Douluo and follow the plot. Don't think that if you have good talents, you will be very popular in Wuhun Hall. Shit, you are not the only one with good talents. Why will others give resources to you? There is definitely a lot of intrigue and intrigue in a place like Wuhun Palace.

I don't know how to say it, but this book is the only Douluo fan book that I can follow. Because in my opinion, many fans either write about Shrek or Wuhundian. And many people just say they lick this and that. Forgive me for not being able to tell. This book may still have many shortcomings, and may be somewhat similar to the original work. First of all, this book is written about Shrek's line. The unavoidable problem is the overlap with the original work, but this is the author's choice. We can't comment on it as "poisonous" because I think his writing style is pretty good. If it is plagiarized from the original work, it will be counted separately. The integration of fate series is indeed a highlight of this novel, but it is just a plot, and it is the author's choice how to integrate it. Secondly, one thing I might get from those trolling masters is that he is a scumbag who has fallen in love with two women one after another. I couldn't accept this, so I changed the setting in my own novel. But in fact, this is the master's private life and we have no right to interfere. Without the guidance of the master, there would be no protagonist Ye Yao, and there would be no Shrek Eight Monsters. I know there are a lot of Shrek novels that are full of weirdos and stuff. But this is just a setting. As long as the plot is innovative, this novel still has merits. The most important point is that everyone feels that this novel overlaps too much with the original work, but in fact, as far as I am concerned, I can distinguish the difference between the protagonist's line and Shrek's line. And I can see that there are many original plots in it. For example, living with Prince Tiandou, and using the spirit avatar in advance. Wait, these are all original plots (memes), not to mention incorporating elements of fate. I hate Tang San licking the protagonist more than licking Tang San. This is also the biggest problem in the novels I created, although I didn't write about it. But it is not advisable to just lick the protagonist or Tang San. This novel has no such problem. For example: the protagonist awakens a god-level martial spirit, and then the entire Shrek group is shocked. The protagonist of all the Shrek regiment fights against thousands of troops by himself, leaving everyone as a foil. At the beginning, the titled Douluo defeats everyone and then reaches the top of the world? I have read all the above novels. Not surprisingly, I gave up on it all. Because these are more brainless than this novel. At least this novel licks Tang San in your mouth. They all have a relatively comprehensive layout during the battle, and no one is stronger. A team means teamwork. Even if the protagonist accounts for a larger proportion, this is a team. If the protagonist is too powerful, it will fall into the "Jack Sue" mode. This is why I like this novel even more. The above are my comments. They only represent my personal views. If you don't like them, please don't comment. Thank you. (Because even if I have different opinions, I won't refute it. This is just what I want to say. I don't want it to escalate into a debate or quarrel. I only represent my personal views.)

To be honest, I don't know when a weird circle started to appear in Douluo fan fiction. For example, even though the writing is pretty good, they still have to follow the protagonist group. The third young master of the Tang family's world view is also pretty good. Why do they have to follow Tang San so much?             ？ You obviously have a very good idea, and you can also create great sparks in Douluo Continent, but your topic is basically the same as most Douluo fan novels. Who has the desire to read this? Okay, this is just a suggestion (눈_눈). This may also be the drawback of basically all fan fiction! But as far as I'm concerned, basically all the fan fiction I like, none of them are meant to make me feel like I'm watching anime or novels again. It's meaningless! What you wrote is exactly the same (for the most part) as the original. To me, why not reread the original?

I tried it, and after reading it I can read it without thinking. If it is poisonous, it may be a poisonous trap, just be careful not to step on it. (If you use your brain, you will be mad to death or step on a poisonous trap and die)

Very well written 👍 Come on, eunuch

Let's talk about the poison 1: Become a master and a scumbag. Li Lun is only useful in the early stage, and the protagonist has no use for his Li Lun. The soul rings are all over the limit. 2: I followed the plot of the original work all the way, and there was nothing innovative about it. 3: I was a brother with Tang San, and I wanted to have sex with Qian Renxue. In the end, they were not the same person. 4: So far, the character of the protagonist is not compatible with the knight. He has none of the eight virtues of the knight. I wanted the popularity of the Holy Sword to support the book, but I ended up writing a failure. The sheep-headed dog-meat seller 5: I almost died twice, and it was still for Tang San. Brother, this is a fanfic, you are trying to figure out who is the protagonist, and the abuser is not like this. The only highlight of this book is the setting of martial arts. I think most readers come here for the holy sword. This book is tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it! ! !

Shuhuang has read more than a hundred chapters, and I will tell you my feelings. Poison, too poisonous! This protagonist is not worthy of the Holy Sword and Martial Spirit, he is not worthy. I personally think that the most important thing about a knight is loyalty. You said you like Qian Renxue, but you still have an affair with Huo Wu Ye Lingling every day. In front of Qian Renxue, you are kissed on the mouth by Huo Wu without interrupting, and you are constantly being messed with by Dang Duan. This is unsightly. Anyway, if you are not well-educated and your poison resistance is comparable to that of Shen Nong, you can give it a try. Anyway, stop reading and say you like someone, and then someone is having an affair with you and you don't break it off quickly. You just hang like this. It really hurts your stomach to watch.

What is the difference between ordinary people and normal authors and water gods? Water 1, how ordinary people write: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. How to write the Water God: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt an uneasy feeling in my heart. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I saw that it was empty inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult choice - go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. There is no trouble in life. Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as an old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two AA batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of this? How can I allow this to happen when no one has heard of it? I am human too! I have feelings too!!! It's just... Making a choice is really, really hard. When I went downstairs to buy batteries, I had to put on clothes and pants, I had to be careful that I forgot to bring my keys, I had to avoid speeding cars on the street, and I had to be wary of meteorites in the sky; thinking about this, I was speechless... But if I were to look for it at home, my dear friends, in this age, who else would still have AA batteries in their home? I thought about it, and I was in a dilemma, and I thought about it for almost two hours. . . . Finally, I couldn't help but let out a deep sigh. Well, I can only put these two AA batteries in my pocket. These two batteries were love tokens given to me by my former and former girlfriends. I thought I didn't have to make such a sacrifice, but it wasn't true. Everyone was involved in the whirlpool of flashlights and batteries. A person's life is a life of solving problems. If you have an old-fashioned flashlight and its center of gravity is not right, then you put the battery in it. !!

Author, what do you write next? Eight virtues of chivalry.​​​​ 1. You wrote about honesty but you went too far. Moreover, the protagonist has a double standard. He told Tang San about his identity as a time traveler but did not tell the whole village. This seems a bit dishonest.                            2.，​ ​ 3. Bravery, I have this, but the protagonist feels to me like a fool who can't see clearly the difference in strength between the enemy and ourselves. European knights are not just good at charging. After all, they are also the ruling class and they also need to use their brains. 4. To be fair, the protagonist was also lost in the Canghui conflict incident. After all, it was Shrek who picked it first.                            5.， If it is about compassion for life, the protagonist is more excited than anyone else when killing soul beasts, such as when helping Oscar obtain the soul ring. If it was pity for the weak, the author didn't write it. 6. Honor, this should be there. But this has a certain conflict with the protagonist, who regards Tang San as his horse and courage. 7. Sacrifice, this is a thing. Although it looks a bit stupid.​ ​ 8. Soul, this protagonist has absolutely no soul. Of course, if you want to say that the protagonist believes in Tang San, just pretend I didn't say it.                             Fate ， Compared with the old sword and the dull hair, the protagonist is even more different. The protagonist is completely lacking in temperament and has no charisma. His character traits are not even as good as Ma Hongjun's, and the protagonist is just a person with a transparent background. Moreover, the protagonist gives me the feeling of a pig teammate. He looks very reliable, but in fact he is very unreliable, such as the Titan ape hand Dugu Bo. The release of the Thirteen Constraints was very 🐮🍺, but the result was the same as the Second Pillar. When the boss came out, I was the second one, and then I was beaten to 🐶. Of course, it may also be a foreshadowing laid by the author. After all, it seems that the protagonist is still a few hundred million points away from being a knight. Also, I have posted before that since the protagonist knows nothing about the plot, the conflict between Tang San and Qian Renxue is basically irreconcilable. No matter which side you stand on, the Holy Sword may turn into a Demon Sword!

Experience it yourself with a picture

Don't follow the protagonist group in the later stage. Look at what the protagonist group does in the later stage. If the protagonist does such things with them, then the protagonist's knight setting will completely collapse. Where are the eight virtues of knights? The protagonist has no enmity with Wuhun Palace and does not need to be an enemy of Wuhun Palace. Wuhun Palace is still very good in the original work. It helps civilians awaken martial arts and inhibits the development of evil soul masters.

Do you want to kill Dugu Bo? If you want to kill, I will help the author construct an idea. After the protagonist kills Dugu Bo, he kills Dugu Yan by cutting the roots. Then Yu Tianheng came to take revenge, accidentally killed Yu Tianheng, and broke with the master Tang San. Hei Hua joined the Spirit Hall, destroyed the three upper sects and two empires, and used traditional justice to backstab Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue when they were proud. He took over the Spirit Empire and established the British Empire and the Knights of the Round Table to counterattack the God Realm. What do you think, author?

Eight virtues of knights Humility (you need to be humble and courteous to anyone, even if you are a bad person) Honesty (loyal to your soul and do what you say) Mercy (hoe the strong and help the weak, help the weak and helpless people) Heroism (knights are not cowards) Justice (there is no absolute justice, everyone has selfishness, relatively speaking, they must be worthy of their own souls) Sacrifice (sacrifice for the person you protect) Honor (fight for honor) Soul (belief in the spirit of the heart)

In fact, the reason why the master is said to be a scumbag does not mean that there is anything wrong with his character or life style. It's that this person has no self-awareness. To put it simply, he has no clue in his heart. He is a loser and yet he dares to provoke the goddess. As a result, the goddess was ruined and her life was ruined! He himself finally found happiness. The goddess who was harmed by him died miserably. That's why everyone dislikes him. Call him a scumbag. If Bibi Dong hadn't fallen in love with him, or if Yu Xiaogang had the strength himself. Then it will never lead to such a result in the end. All in all, it is still a question of strength. A waste, ruined a girl who should be bright and bright. Ruined her life. If it weren't for falling in love with this scumbag, would Bibi Dong have been ruined? All in all, everything that went wrong was his fault. Pooh!

Go worship some master, it looks disgusting, I don't even want to see the sword of my king

After reading many Douluo fans, I summarized how not to be poisonous: ① Don't worship the master ② Don't lick Tang San ③ Don't follow too many of the original plot, or at least don't have the same outcome as the original plot ④ Don't be a virgin, don't be hypocritical, don't always talk about big principles ⑤ If you are not good at emotional scenes, don't use too many heroines. Anyone else, welcome to add →

This book is a novel composed of 80% original work and 20% poisonous points. The first poisonous point is that since the protagonist is a time traveler and has read the original work, he writes like an aborigine who knows nothing. If you want to write like this, why should you set it as having read the original work? The reason given by the author is: It has been more than ten years since the protagonist saw Douluo, and he has almost forgotten everything. Even so, I think some basic things should not be forgotten, right? For example, there are those from the Shrek Seven Monsters, for example, Xiao Wu is a spirit beast. For example, it has been more than ten years since I watched Dou Po, but I remember breaking off the engagement and that he had a Medusa wife. I don't say I remember everything, at least I remember roughly. It's really poisonous. I can only say that since it is a time traveler, it is either set to have never seen Douluo, or it should have the memory of the original work. Every chapter I read is basically a copy and paste of the original work, and then add two sentences in the middle.

You really surrendered to a wild innate soul-powerful Holy Sword Wuhun, and the Wuhun Palace would simply let you go? If you are a farmer with no background and can't be used by me, just die. The Blue Silver Grass has no precedent and everyone knows that it is a useless martial spirit. You are a sword and you will be a titled Douluo in the later stage. It is worth arranging an evil soul master to attack the village just for you. For a force, killing an ordinary person in the village and replacing it with a genius is too profitable.

Wuyuzi, if you want Qian Renxue to be the heroine, why do you need to maintain a good relationship with Tang San and his group? Qian Renxue and Tang San are feuds and there is no possibility of reconciliation. The subsequent plot can already be imagined.

Uh... I saw it a little late! Leave a mark... This book is about following the protagonist, going through the plot, and copying the original work... Then the sword was given to my king, but it does not have my king's character... After all, some things represent something...

I saw that the protagonist couldn't help but retreat after refusing to accept Sword Douluo as his disciple. I wondered why the protagonist was so resistant to accepting Sword Douluo as his disciple. He was titled Douluo and had great swordsmanship. He even came to find the protagonist in person, which gave him enough face. You, the protagonist, had no need and no right to refuse, but you still refused. You refused without even giving a reason for the refusal. You're crazy!

This setting of adding soul rings to gradually increase the armor is really good (✪▽✪). It is really novel to write a noble phantom to Douluo Continent. I hope that the character of the protagonist can become more and more complete and have a clear contrast with other characters.

This book is about worshiping the master and licking Tang San's routines. The routines are boring and old.

Now when looking at Douluo fandom, there are basically two lines, the Tang San Shrek line and the Wuhun Palace line. In Tang San's line, the most fearful thing is to lick Tang San without thinking, such as the kind of crazy matchmaking when he first meets Xiao Wu. In the Wuhun Palace line, the most fearful thing is to criticize Tang San and the master without thinking.

What a rubbish writing! I suggest the author re-write this righteous way of killing his wife with pig's feet, and end with Tang San guarding the mainland! Also, you wrote Qian Renxue as too nymphomaniacal!

How can I put it, the pig's feet are written in a nondescript way, not like the protagonist at all, not outstanding at all! ! ! It feels like I'm writing about eight protagonists, he just has more roles 🤔

Just add a person to the original work

When I read this book, there were two things that initially attracted me: 1. Wuhun Curry Sticks 2. The protagonist seems to know the plot of the original work, or at worst knows the ambiguous plot and characters. Then when I looked at the back, I gradually realized that the second one was gone. Suddenly my heart ached, one of my two good points was cut off! Originally, I said, it doesn't matter even if the protagonist can't remember so many plots, but it's enough to know some important information, such as Xiao Wu's transformation into a hundred thousand year soul beast, Tang San's absorption of the Man-Faced Demon Spider soul ring and other very impressive things in the original work. At least there must be that impression - but there is none. But other than that, the author's writing is pretty good. More than ten years have passed, and I have almost forgotten the plot of the original work. I only remember some relevant information, so there is no sense of "following the original plot line". The remaining Curry Stick Wuhun, the sense of showing off that something I like is shining brightly in the world of Douluo, is a very important factor that attracts me to continue watching, otherwise I would not be able to continue watching at all. To be honest, I personally think that if the protagonist of this kind of time-travel fanfic does not know the original information at all, it would be better to write the protagonist of the original Douluo Continent.

What a strange writing. It feels like the protagonist doesn't know anything, not even Xue Qinghe's identity, so why should he be assigned the identity of a time traveler.

No, your handling of Ye Lingling is really speechless. Why flirt if you don't marry?