Bingdi Xianjue

I came from the post bar, and I didn't expect to post on the same day. It was a bit fate, so I just chatted casually. The sentences are relatively smooth and accurate, and the description skills are not bad. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are not bad. But it doesn't feel smooth to read. Personally, I feel that maybe because of my speaking habits, the sudden appearance of classical Chinese is very dramatic, such as the sentence "no hindrance". To be honest, half-literate and half-white writing requires a very high sense of language and can easily look nondescript. And I feel that the writing is not so smooth and smooth, and I always feel that the protagonist's sense of loneliness that is not taken seriously is almost meaningless. Personally, I think it may be because the external pressure on the protagonist is not strong enough, and the dialogue text of the protagonist is not expressive enough. Finally, after reading the first chapter, except for picking up Ning Wufeng, the other actions of the protagonist felt really artificial to me. I was even jealous of my sister, and I didn't see her doing anything positive. It was a bit difficult to get involved. Of course, this may also be due to the different perspectives of men and women or because I am not the target reader? If it were designed by me, it might be that the protagonist was born earlier and would be the elder sister. Because of the seemingly correct reason of "the elder sister must give way to the younger sister", I have made a lot of efforts, but was not taken seriously or recognized. Wouldn't it seem that the sense of substitution and the rationalization of the protagonist's emotions would be stronger? Finally, come on!

You were persuaded to quit after reading the introduction. You are so embarrassed even if you don't have CP. How dare you be so generous and everyone forces you to do so? The hand is on you, what kind of writing you want to write attracts what type of readers. Attracting readers who like no cp but still being pretentious, why don't you just arrange for cp to be read so that people who like romance can watch it.

Vote without CP, give it a thumbs up!

It is said that there is no cp, but at the beginning it really discourages me from being indecisive and sentimental. At the end, I say: I ask you to marry me, are you willing? Oh my God, is this a cp-free fairy tale? Emotional description chapter: Extenuating circumstances can make a decision. As a result, several of the first pictures describe the shortcomings of the heroine...

Come on, I hope the heroine will be tougher in the future. Sister Bai Lianhua is so tired of jumping around all day, I feel really uncomfortable if I don't give her a few slaps😖 Also, if I were a mother who really loved her child, I would not force the engagement regardless of her daughter's wishes. After my daughter agreed, she seemed so impatient for fear of regretting it. Doesn't this mean that she loves her sister more because she doesn't care about the other daughter's feelings at all?

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The writing is delicate. I believe the author has read a lot of books. I am looking forward to the plot of the rise of the heroine. Come on. 🤭

I update regularly at 21:00 every night, and I will update twice after it is put on the shelves. Little cuties can safely collect it 😊

Already invested and rewarded ❤️

I'm a little afraid to look at it. I came here because I don't have CP. But the author's appearance doesn't feel like a cp-free one, and he seems to be causing trouble.

It is said that there is no cp, but now that everyone is talking about that so-and-so, I might as well kill him.

I regret not investing before you signed the contract

I saw it on Tieba, so I came to see if you have become a god.