Taoyuan in Another World

No one will read this kind of thing. Let's learn how others write it first. The group with many flaws don't know where to start. I can only say that you are writing a "story" rather than a "novel". Paragraphization, volume division, punctuation, and entry points all have problems. Before writing a novel, you should at least read a few novels. Although this age is rare, there is really nothing to compliment about what I write. Nor can we exaggerate the content just because of our age.

I read in the news that the author is still a primary school student in sixth grade 😰 and his name is Ye Dongyun, right?

This book is a pitfall, but it is not as good as a finished product!

I have to admire my self-control so well at such a young age. I am also writing a novel, but I have very few words. I am too lazy to write 😭

You still have a lot to learn!

It's not bad to be able to write like this at such a young age.

To be honest, the content and details are really lacking.

All I can say is that this book can only be read as a story.

Suggestion: Writing a novel is not an essay. One chapter should contain more content, and it should be divided into paragraphs. It will not look good if they are crowded together. You should be a junior high school student now, study hard.

Check in, come on, the author, and wish millions of people become gods.