Lan Zhiwan

I feel that DaDa is more of a martial arts writer. Martial arts already has so many predecessors, and it is not easy to write brilliantly. I feel that the whole story of DaDa is relatively smooth, and there are no secular routines. The first chapter is relatively ordinary, and then the plot development seems to have characteristics. However, I have a small suggestion. DaDa should be more playful in the writing style, which would be more interesting. After all, the character in the first chapter feels like a lively person.

You still need to update quickly, please work hard. A novel like this that combines ancient Chinese language with fantasy still needs a lot of work, and the length is so short that it's hard to understand anything. But the big words are really down-to-earth and fairy-like, which is very interesting.

The author has superb writing style and detailed character descriptions. I recommend it to everyone. Keep up the good work and look forward to updates!

I usually like to read the latest chapters of books I haven't read before, because the latest chapters can judge the author's true writing style at this time. After reading the last chapter, overall the author's writing is good and the scenes are tense, but the details are not great and the visuals are not enough. No other questions, I will pay close attention to your book. Looking back.

I have thought about this problem before. Will anyone ask me if I haven't signed a contract yet after writing 100,000 words? I think I'd better put this thing here. The book was blocked on the second day after it was reviewed, but I just refused 😐

Although the description is flawed, it is spot on, the imagery is strong, and the characters are well drawn.

The concept is quite interesting, the writing is smooth, and the images are strong. If you keep writing, it will definitely be a good book. Come on (ง •_•)ง

Okay, it looks good. As a person who is used to reading stories about killing and killing people, I thought it was quite interesting. It would be better if I added a little bit of psychological description of the characters.

Good! The writing is subtle and tasteful, so be sure to save it and read it slowly! Learn from and pay tribute to the outstanding!

Hey-hey! Beautiful girls write about handsome guys, and handsome guys write about beautiful girls! By the way, Shuzhu, write more handsome guys!

The description is very good and has a sense of picture. Come on 🌹

The author's writing style is delicate and fluent. It is a good book. Come on

Seven pushes a day! Come on, author＾0＾~!

I'm here to invest, the 39th one, remember to check 🤝

I haven't finished it yet The overall novel is light-hearted and humorous. It seems quite casual and the plot is quite smooth. But I can't tell the difference between male and female characters. It must be an illusion.

Around mid-June, I started to cope with the final exams and professional weeks, so I started to update very slowly, especially during the professional weeks. I felt very tired and drew pictures on the computer every day. In the end, I became more and more lazy, and updated once a week. From the initial active completion to passive completion, I simply changed the status to complete today. However, this book has summed up a lot of experience for me, and I wish others to become gods as soon as possible... 😁😁😁

It's 100,000 words, and I haven't signed a contract yet! It's a bit confusing! Come on, author＾0＾~! Seven pushes a day! Top!

The writing is very delicate and I am looking forward to the next plot.

Happy 520, let's work hard together

So well written and beautiful

Come on, come on 😁😁

I have an exam coming up soon, so annoying...

Today's super gas card🌹

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The writing is good, the details are well described, and the narrative is smooth. Come on!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~