I Built the Mythic Age

The creativity is good and the writing is good, but if you keep writing it, it will be a matter of time before it breaks down. Every country has its own mythology system. Think about the 30,000 gods in Japan??? There are many gods in India, and every animal has a god. Think about Taoism, Buddhism, heaven and earth in our country. If you really want to collect and write about it, there are millions of gods. How will you complete it later? Are gods walking all over the place? My personal suggestion is to create a system. Gods are only those with relatively high life levels. Myths from all parties are only high-level life forces. The number must be controlled. The higher the level, the more restrictions and the smaller the number. Learn the secrets. There is only one level 0 god per faction, only 3 level 1 gods, and no more than 10 level 2 gods. This kind of Similar ones can be learned, low-level ones only need skills and heavenly materials and earthly treasures, high-level ones need rituals and beliefs, and top-level ones need to accommodate laws or uniqueness. I have seen too many stories similar to Myth Resurrection that were written down, because at the beginning they only cared about having fun, and gods came out one after another, and then there were millions and billions of gods, and the earth was not enough for them.

It would be too much for the protagonist to kill "Mephisto" at the end of the game. It can be sealed but impossible to kill. As a chess player, the protagonist is best not to end up fighting easily. Especially for such a high-level supporting character, it would be boring if he died too simply. Although the protagonist is stronger, it still feels incredible or "too fake". After all, in the real-life setting where the characters come from, these big guys have long left an "indelible" and difficult impression on people's hearts. Just like someone told you, "Schwarzenegger was beaten with one hand on the road today", would you feel it was fake? You simply cannot accept this kind of news at once, and it is difficult to change your image of him. Whether it is "Mephisto" or a real-life mythical boss in the setting. It is best for the protagonist not to play crushing, or even to do it himself. According to the mythological setting, "Mephisto" is definitely the one who must be defeated by Lao Yin. It is not a problem that can be solved by force alone. So it's best to choose the seal In fact, the most important thing is the existence of these golden supporting characters, which makes this world interesting. It is suggested that the protagonist transform the earth and increase its area. Or open up more huge different worlds and different spaces, otherwise the earth is really not enough for this group of mythical characters

1. First of all, regarding the power system, there is indeed something inappropriate. However, except for the system that directly provides it, other extraordinary powers will use a completely new set of power systems, which will not affect it. 2. Regarding Shushan and Kunlun, I have carefully read all your opinions. It seems that everyone agrees that Kunlun's status is much higher. If so, I will revise the article. From now on, Kunlun will be number one in the world! (It is impossible to write about Heavenly Court in detail. This kind of extraordinary organization in the form of a government is difficult to write about and will be irritated) 3. The rest is not available for the time being. I will add it later. Finally... Brothers, give me more votes to count (๑>؂<๑)~

This kind of novels all have a common shortcoming. There are too many things happening on the Internet. Why not write like this, using the fluctuations of fate to gain points. Ten million people believe it, but it is not as good as the belief of President So-and-so. These people believe it, and the distortion effect on the world's perception is completely different. The harm caused by drinking a good drink, and you pass out and vomit all over the floor is different from the harm caused by a drunk driver who kills someone. However, this novel still stays at the level of whether the wine is good or not, rather than the deeper impact.

The character I created cannot control my vomiting

In fact, I feel that if you create a character, then you should have control. Otherwise, you would spend your little money every day to create a person who has no benefits. Isn't it interesting? Especially the character created is obviously much more powerful than the protagonist. People with their own personality and ideas will not allow evil hands.

I think the author is a bit too biased towards humans. Since he is writing about mythical resurrection, he shouldn't be too biased towards one race.

I have only read the first chapter, and I will tell you my feelings. First, there is no sense of involvement, and the fight between dragons and dragons is not passionate at all. Second, how do you write an evil dragon in a cold pool on the beach? 😅 Third, the dragons started fighting, but some people didn't run away. If the author saw this situation, would you run away? It's obvious that the dragons are here to eat people, and you're still watching the show! Fourth, there are many of this type. It's boring to start a big fight as soon as they come out. You can just find a temple or Taoist temple with strong incense to have a god come down to earth and return to his place. The purple energy came three thousand miles east, and the gods stepped on the clouds and entered the temple. They were greeted by dragons and phoenixes, and the heavenly soldiers cleared the way, and the assistant officials followed. I'm no better at fighting than you. I'll leave a legacy in the end or something like that.

To create a mythical world, at least the spiritual energy needs to be revived later. The earth should be made bigger, or the earth should become a round sky in mythology. Otherwise, the gods, Buddhas, demons, ghosts and Western gods will drag them somewhere. If there is a war between gods and demons, the earth will be over. Don't give up halfway when writing a mythological revival novel. Come on, author.

The protagonist is sb. Instead of going to the beach where there are tens of thousands of people, he went to the beach where there are thousands of people.