Dimensional Restaurant in Konoha

There is a problem with the logic. The robot that suddenly appears next to the protagonist has no identification and will be considered a spy when it appears in Konoha. In the beginning, Kakashi will hallucinate after eating it. The Hokage will notice the protagonist and Danzo will be kidnapped. The protective facilities of the restaurant will also be exposed. There is also the issue of the ingredients. Where do the ingredients come from? If it comes from the system, it will be even more dangerous after the Hokage notices it. The fourth generation may be kind, but the third generation and Danzo will not let the protagonist go. The protective function of the restaurant will inevitably be exposed in the first few chapters. But if the author wants to overhaul it, I think it is equivalent to changing the outline. I have already read the eleventh chapter. I don't know what will happen if I continue to read. Let's take a look. Visually, it is a chat group article covered in a restaurant.

Author, when you want to hire a waiter, you have to hire someone who doesn't know how to do it. Can't you just hire someone who understands? No?

I myself have been a bookworm for ten years. I was short of books and started writing my own novels. Writing novels is actually different from reading novels. Xie Xiaoxiao is more immersed in the world of novels, and I kind of fell in love with this feeling. Even if it takes ten years to write this book, I still won't be able to read it.

Strict wife control

After reading twenty or thirty chapters, let me share my personal thoughts. The protagonist doesn't have much fighting ability, so he can be considered a farming style. The first employee, a battle angel. There is also a chat group in hand. According to the current content in the introduction, the protagonist is a passive participant. However, as a modern person with cheats and a super-standard talent like Big Gray Wolf, he would be bullied by Yuan Fei Rizhan. Not to mention that the people in the village are jealous of ordinary businessmen and have made it clear how unreasonable this cerebral palsy operation of using power to suppress others is. You hold the ultimate trump card of Big Big Wolf in your hand and you are still scared to the end. I really felt like I had eaten this episode. It is impossible to talk about the power of Konoha without talking about you, the cook. Why would he do this because you are a useless food besides being delicious? ? ? Just because you want to feed readers💩?

Actually, I quite like the setting of the book What's It Called? The tastes of humans and non-humans are actually different. There are foods specially made for humans. Non-humans can eat them but only to enjoy them freshly. There are foods specially offered to non-human beings that have special effects when eaten by non-human beings. This setting is actually very good, you can use it.

I'm really impressed. I'm really impressed with this ending. You entered the palace so early.

Originally, the front part was a bit white, but I can still read it. In Chapter 10, you started talking about politics. Isn't it good that you just opened a restaurant and it was just mediocre? Don't do these flashy things

I drew the main character on a whim... I ruined the painting as soon as I painted it... 🙂🙂🙂

It has been recommended, and there have been more and more book reviews these days. Whether it's scolding, trolling, or normal comments, I read them all carefully. First of all, thank you to the readers who support me, and then thank you to the readers who scold me. Originally, I simply thought, what's wrong with doujin modification? But today I suddenly realized it! Character is the key to determine whether a character can leave an image in the readers' minds. When I magically change the character's personality, the character will deviate from the track in the reader's mind, and the character will no longer be the original character. On the importance of personality! Then there is the issue of outline. While understanding the importance of character, I found that my novel lacked the 'end' of each chapter. To be honest, I don't have chapter outlines when writing novels. I think that will affect my thinking and imagination. But today I suddenly discovered that you don't have to have an outline, but you must have an 'end', which is what plot I want to write in this chapter. This book is my first book, a practice work. The results were very poor, and I lost my goal. But then it suddenly dawned on me that I was writing novels for fun, not to make money. Is it any difference that my grades are poor now that I have made no money in the past few months? And looking at more people who are worse off than me but still persisting, I feel a little ashamed and a little lucky. Therefore, I may finish this book ahead of schedule. The original plan of writing four or five hundred chapters may be about 200 chapters. The main reason for being ahead of schedule is that I didn't make a complete plan when writing a book for the first time. I just started typing with the keyboard, which made the book a failure. The theme is off-kilter, the characters are confusing, the plot logic is wrong, the pace is too fast, the details are insufficient, and the writing style in the early stage is stretched. Although the writing style has been greatly improved now, these previous things cannot be changed through revision, or they must be rewritten. Thank you all for your company. Although this book will be finished in advance soon, it will not be an eunuch. Even if the writing is not good, it must have a beginning and an end. After this book, I will write another book with a rigorous attitude. I have the subject matter and the inspiration. What I lack is the attention and rigor to the book.

After the writing improved, the previous chapters were reworked, a large number of typos were corrected, and a large number of details were added.

Are you serious about the role of Adamantium alloy in the world of Death?

It seems that the author doesn't know how to cook, so this type of stuff is just embarrassing. Sorry, I can't stand it anymore.

There are over 100 million typos, and there are about 12 typos in the first chapter 🤫

When are we going to catch the villain and Otsutsuki Agarwood? These two clowns are so disgusting.

If Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf came to reality, who would you like?

I'm fascinated by the relationship between Ichigo and Rukia on the Shinigami side. Ichigo likes Rukia?

Hum ╯^╰╯^╰╯^╰╯^╰╯^╰╯^╰╯^╰Lying doesn't mean you don't need money, woo woo woo woo

Stark Shit Big

Have all the previous chapters been changed? It looks weird.

Write down the prisoner of delicious food in it, the prisoner who loves delicious food very much.

It's been too long to write Naruto. When are we going to arrange Gensokyo and the fox demon matchmaker? I'm really looking forward to seeing the wolf girl from Gensokyo meeting Big Big Wolf😄😄

It's very watery, and it feels like a running account.