Zhuang Shengxiao's Dream About Butterflies - Past and Present Lives

The most important thing for newcomers to coding is persistence, come on! Hope to continue writing

😊Thank you to every friend who voted for me to recommend, collect and invest. As a newbie, I don't understand many rules. I will keep updating. I also hope that everyone can give me valuable suggestions, which may also affect the direction of the later story.

The writing is good, but I still have a few comments. The novel relies on plot to win. I read one chapter, and the descriptions of recipes and dishes and the actions of waiters during meals accounted for more than half of it. You can basically skip it. Although the writing is good, it can also be called watery. My personal opinions, please bear with me if they are inappropriate.

Hello, author (^_^)/Can you leave a link?

Too much force! ! I tried my best to describe every action of the protagonist. To be honest, it really made me feel like I wanted to watch TV. But I think the actions in some places don't need to be too detailed! For example, gasping, it is written in large letters as "like a bellows...", And there are similar usages later. I personally think that sometimes it is good to be a little simpler. The plot is fresh and good, and the main story line is great. The book has been collected and the recommendation votes have been submitted. Come on!

Come on, it's from Tieba, it's very well written!

I just saw your book in Tieba. I have already invested in it. Come on＾0＾~👍👍👍

Congratulations on the launch, here are five recommendation votes

I have collected a lot of works and encourage each other.

The writing is smooth and natural, I am looking forward to it (๑˙ー˙๑)