Please Hit Me Hard

The book review is here! Although I mainly watch male videos, I haven't read any system articles. After reading the author's book, I finally understand what a system is... The author is still very careful in shaping the characters. Although the male protagonist Tong Lang is a bit wretched, he is still a loyal person. The female protagonist Chu Weiwei is a tomboy, but still has the unique charm of a woman. The characters of the supporting characters are also very clear. As a novice writer, I can learn from you! Although the writing style of male videos is not popular, I think the author's writing style can be improved, because some places are too sloppy. For example, the male protagonist suddenly fell down and then woke up again. There can be more description here. Overall it's pretty good! Especially the author's language is humorous, and many jokes can be naturally incorporated into it! I'm still not satisfied after reading it, so I've already invested in it. I hope the author will keep up the good work! (PS: Can you read my book? According to the agreement (an agreement made a long time ago), we should read it. I have read it carefully!)

I just read the third chapter and I started to suspect that this system will turn people into girls in the future.

Congratulations on signing the contract♪(^∇^*)

A relaxing and fantasy story, keep writing, good luck💪

Easy and funny, the writing is smooth, come on!

Back to comment. Let me talk about the advantages first, the paragraphs are clear and the theme is bright. So it's easy to read. In short, you have handled my shortcomings well, keep up the good work. Let's talk about suggestions. When dealing with some stalks, you may need to consider the audience. For example, when I was reading, I couldn't understand some stalks quickly. Personal suggestions for reference.

Collected! Nice writing! Keep updating! Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Hehehe, the writing is really good, come on

I like your style, keep it up ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞ

I hope that readers who like it can give your valuable recommendation votes and investments, and I will try my best to continue to persevere!

It's really good. Come on, come on 😆

I don't often read this kind of systematic article, so I can't tell you anything about it, but the author's writing style is humorous and the story is very interesting. It's worth reading.

Collected it, please do more updates

It feels good, keep up the good work, author

The writing is pretty good, quite fluent, and the writing style is also very good! 🌹🌹Come on

It was interesting and humorous to read, not bad, I will continue reading 🌹

It's too late to come to the signing site today. Thank you for your continued support. I will continue to work hard!