Work Notes of a Big Tool Man

Pretty good, I hope I can keep up the good work

Come on! Received

We politely commented on each other and read a few pictures. The introduction left a lot of suspense, but I felt that I could add a line, such as the name of the male protagonist, to go on a adventure together, or to play around or explore the secrets! It may be more attractive, and the author uses the first person, which is relatively rare, but overall it looks good, the characters are well portrayed, the imagination is quite big, and the writing is also good, but I feel that the writing is a little behind the imagination.

The writing style is pretty good, and I didn't find it strange that the first person is used.

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The content is attractive, thank you very much

The subject matter is novel, thank you to the author!

The subject matter is good and the writing is smooth! Already collected and followed, keep up the good work

The author's writing style is exquisite and the plot develops smoothly. Come on

Wesley's Monkey God is interesting😄, come on!

Come on! Unexpectedly found that it is very beautiful

1. The title and introduction of the book are quite interesting 2. The first person is not easy to write, and the writing is okay, at least it doesn't look distorted. 3. The plot and suspense are set well. Come on big time

If you like this book, please give me a recommendation vote to support it 😭, because it is almost 100,000 words, and I really don't want to be a eunuch when facing the problem of signing a contract...

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I like it so much, I must update it every day. After reading the first few chapters, I fell in love 🤭

What a cool title! The design is so interesting! Come on!

The plot is very attractive, thank you very much

It's almost 100,000 words, haven't you signed a contract yet? I feel like it's very well written.

The author's plot rhythm is very good, the writing style is also very good, and the character description is delicate. Personal opinion: I believe it would be better if you could add a little more description of the environment, such as what kind of house, white walls, wooden floors, etc. Would be better in the first chapter. Come on＾0＾~

The concept is good, but some details feel a bit abrupt. It could be written better, keep up the good work!

I love this title, it's very cool and the content is great.

The story is very immersive and easily captures the reader's desire to read on. However, I still want to make some humble suggestions on how to handle segmentation appropriately to give readers a relaxing reading experience. The second point is to pay attention to the accurate use of punctuation marks. Finally, I wish the author to sign the contract as soon as possible and update every day 🤭

Generally speaking, the first person narrative is difficult to read, but this book actually had no obstacles and allowed me to read it smoothly. Let me talk about the title of the book first. It is a bit difficult to pronounce and difficult to remember. The cover and the title of the book also don't match, so I suggest you pick one carefully. It can be seen throughout the book that the author has a lot of imagination, and several cases are quite interesting. But I have to say that your writing style cannot keep up with your imagination. The beginning could obviously be described more interestingly, but as soon as you write it like this, it becomes very bland. It is recommended that the case at the beginning be revised again. Already collected, wishing you a great success~

Ahem, that's gone. This type is still rare, and I read it right away. I forgot to write a book review, so I read it again, and my opinions are as follows. Not to mention the disadvantages of skipping the first person, it has a strong sense of inclusion, but this is normal. People who write this type of writing are often very good, so I won't comment too much. In terms of plot, the suspicion at the beginning is very good, but the sense of weirdness is not strong enough. It may be because of the scientific creation, so the author did not write it very weird, which is also consistent with reality. When it comes to the earthquake, it is very brain-burning, but the villain is too simple. One is careless, and two are fools. Although there may be the pleasure of IQ crushing in the early stage, it will also invisibly reduce the strength of the villain organization. Be cautious about this. It is recommended to watch "The Hidden Code" to learn about the villain's character. After all, IQ still needs to be highlighted. The character creation is a bit stiff, and the protagonist's crushing IQ cannot be highlighted. It is understandable that wisdom arises in a hurry, but not too many times. You need to see the progress of the protagonist. This can also be studied in "The Tibetan Code". This is not to recommend the book, but to really study it. As for whether real ghosts should appear in the later stage, it is debatable, but if so, you can imitate "The Last Taoist Priest". I feel that the writing style is a bit similar, and they are all biased towards the modern background.