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I feel that the protagonist is too doting on the little one. He looks very uncomfortable and feels like a t-dog. Moreover, he doesn't look like the Emperor Huangtian in the future who is pampered and protected like a pig's foot as his son. I hope the author can see a little improvement and I will feel better.

I was planning to write a fanfic myself, and I randomly searched and found this book. It's really well written, and I liked it in many places! ! ! It can score 95 points in my eyes! ! ! Why not updated! Heartbroken! ! After reading this book, I don't even dare to start writing! Because I started to think about the fast-travel genre, starting with multiple worlds, including Zhetian, this book integrates it very well, really! !

This book is too rushed, either fighting or fighting on the way, and there is no trace of daily life, treasure hunting, or characterization at all. Just fighting, it feels like I am rushing to finish writing and then download the book.

I like Brother Dong's "Perfect World" very much, but I couldn't find a fan. Then I came up with the idea of ​​writing my own book, but I didn't expect to find it today. The author writes very well, come on💪! And author, did you publish this book at the beginning of the world? Why didn't you see it bubbling at the starting point?

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The protagonist is just a licking dog. He doesn't give good things to his little ones if he has them. He's stupid. He's so tired of harming the system. He just can't prove the truth on his own.

After taking a look at the introduction, let's find out that his Transformation Method is Shi Hao's original Immortal Emperor Method. It seems that no one else can use it except himself. Xing Zi Mi is also a Supreme Method. Can time evolve even if an Immortal becomes a Supreme? Harm, is this the case now?

Can you write less about the female protagonist, and the protagonist is only in her early teens, and forget about No. 10'S desolate figure walking alone? The heroine is useless at all, just a drag

This is directly over. The author gave up.

This is a fucking eunuch story, there isn't even a female protagonist.

Everyone knows that Shi Hao traveled through time and returned to the past, and then left many remains. So which came first, the wilderness or the stone village?

There was a bit of dissuasion at the beginning, I mean seriously, you really want to write Liu Shen as a fool who has never seen the world.

With this worldview of perfection, I still like Wudiwen. Because there are so many pitfalls. It can be said that many of the sinkholes in Perfection were filled in by the fan authors themselves. The most important thing is that without the strength of the upper levels of the pyramid, you would not have access to these at all.

Witch + Yue Chan + Yun Xi, I think these three are perfect, but having too many would be bad.

The Immortal-Breaking Curse was planted by Shi Hao after the war at Bianhuang Diguan, when he returned to Nine Heavens and Ten Lands and was planted by the remaining immortals of the Immortal Palace. Then Shi Hao returned to the Eight Realms of the Lower Realm. At that time, he had escaped. Rather than in the realm of the Venerable, in the lower realm of the Seven Gods

I think what the author wrote is a bit taken for granted. I rarely post this kind of comments, but, what can I say, if the innate holy body is born and becomes a saint, just give it to Liu Shen Sanguang Divine Water, I can only say that it is a bit taken for granted.

Wouldn't it be better to write "Shading the Sky" after the end of "The Perfect World"? It's all about perfection. Who can withstand the story of "Shading the Sky"?

Okay, okay! Just accept the Witch Yuechan. I was really upset when I saw Perfect World.

Let me give my personal evaluation of the poisonous points. 1. When I saw that the protagonist received the Holy Water of Three Views and gave it to Liu Shen, but Liu Shen was not well yet, I didn't want to watch it. Even the Bodhi tree can be cured by Sanguan Holy Water, so why not the willow tree? 2. It is another big poison when the protagonist obtains the Dao Ti (personal abbreviation) and has not made much progress in strength. You must know that the Dao Ti is born to be a saint. 3. Why don't you go with the protagonist when he goes to steal eggs? But in my original work, they went to steal eggs together, but nothing happened and they kidnapped a security guard. The protagonist said he was afraid of the butterfly effect while changing the plot, which made me speechless. If we had gone up together, would it be a loss to return the egg to Big Bird on the 10th in the end? Is it a big loss to kidnap a big security guard who steals steak? When the protagonist, Big Bird, is killed, the plot has already changed. When one of the key characters is killed in the early stage, the real butterfly effect begins, and the subsequent plot begins to gradually deviate from the main track. So I couldn't stand it anymore and said goodbye.

Be careful, eunuch article, the catalog mentioned a lot of female character names, but it turned out to be a eunuch. He concentrated on licking No. 10. He probably couldn't hold on while licking, so he just messed up the ending.

Reading the introduction is so speechless. Are you able to practice the Heaven-Shielding Technique in Perfect? He also has a constitution that covers the sky. Do you understand this world and just write nonsense novels? The Dharma of each era is only suitable for that world. It is true that perfection is connected with covering the sky. Why does the Dharma of covering the sky exist and not continue to practice perfection? Isn't it just because times and environments are different? Ang, are you perfecting the method of covering the sky? Putting aside whether you can succeed in cultivation, aren't you taking off your pants and farting?

I feel like vomiting when I see the protagonist named Shi. I looked at the table of contents and already guessed what you wrote.

The Green Scaled Eagle is written to death. Please stop reading.

Everyone, please look forward to my first book, "I Recommended the Perfect World"! Released in March!

1. With the red-edged spear and the immortal shield, kill all the Immortal Kings and destroy the Nine Heavens! 2. On the top of the immortal world, proud of the world, there will be heaven with me, Anlan. 3. Those who praise my true name will see eternal life in reincarnation 4. You followed the trend and suppressed my mount. This is not a big disturbance. If you dare to take another step forward, the world will be turned upside down! " 5. You can come and give it a try! Humph, can't you deceive me that my true body cannot come? 6. The king cannot be humiliated! 7. Shocking the past and shining the present, even if I have to carry the abyss on my back and support the original imperial city with one hand, I, An Lan, am as invincible as the world!

It's sad to see that the Green Scaled Eagle was written to death in Chapter 10 o(╥╥)o When I first read Perfect, I shed a lot of tears at this part. There are obviously many ways to write books, but the author chose the most disgusting one.

I really like the blue-scaled eagle. The author gave it to me and was speechless.

It's not easy to play games. If you cultivate to the point where you can play with someone for hundreds of thousands of years, your cultivation will gradually become smarter, and then you'll be given tens of thousands of years to study. Then there will be games.

I vomited, it turned out to be a eunuch article? Send him a blade

The author is like writing a storybook. The people in the book are all skeletons with no flesh and blood at all. If you can't write well, don't write it. It's really poisonous.