Two Ducks Merge

As a big fan of the author's novel I think it's time to write something The author's book is the first female-channeled novel I've read (really (｡･ω･｡)). To be honest, the huge change in male-female novels made me uncomfortable at first (I had an indescribable feeling when I read it), but I have to say that the novels written by the author are relatively It's true, (at least I, a scumbag in school, learned a lot of weird knowledge from it), and the writing style is also very good (he was a great essayist in high school!). I think the reason for not being popular is very simple, it's just that there are too few words, it's because the new writer is not famous, etc., But I believe that the author's slow and meticulous work will definitely bring a world belonging to Xi Nu to readers! Come on⊙▽⊙

I started... You know, you followed my trumpet (●°u°●)​", and then I came. Although it was... I paid attention to it nearly a month ago, but we can't be cold-hearted! So here I am, coming gently, walking gently, waving my sleeves without taking away a single cloud... Okay, let's get down to business! 1. Regarding the introduction, you should put the QQ group number at the end. It would be better that way ٩( 'ω' )و. Putting it at the front would kind of ruin the whole thing (although the introduction is only a few lines of words.) Then let's talk about the introduction, which is short and to the point, and summarizes the intention of this article. 2. The opening chapter is still difficult to understand if you don't read it carefully. For example, I read it back and forth six or seven times before I got a general idea. For personal names... They are complicated, similar, and easy to get confused. As for the character's language, the punctuation marks are not correct, and you often use periods as commas, which is a bit... 3. The content is attractive and the highlights are praiseworthy. But I don't know why it feels a little messy when I look at it, but it doesn't seem to be messy when I look closely. It's so strange. ٩( 'ω' )و 4. Oh, after reading several chapters, the writing gradually became lighter and more interesting, and the writing style became smoother. The characterization is also very good, but... Let's add some highlights. You have one vote and I have one vote. Xi Nu will make his debut tomorrow. If you don't vote and I don't vote, when will Xi Nu come forward? This is the most profound sentence in my memory, haha ​​ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶ з Is there any! That's it! Welcome to visit the book "Warm and Cool". Don't read my book, it's broken. Come on sister Xi Nu, you are the best, you are the strongest. (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

Thank you very much for your chapter reviews. However, due to the revision of the article, some of the chapter reviews are seriously misaligned. I will take time to clean them up every day. I hope you can understand.

After reading it, the comments may be a little thin because of the relatively small content. First of all, in terms of writing style, there really isn't much to say about this part. Female video writers generally have pretty good writing skills, so there's no need to worry about this aspect. The plot is not bad. The setting of two souls in one body is more outstanding, but I hope that the original soul is not a supporting role. It is best that both souls have different preferences and everyone likes it, so that the plot can be interesting. In terms of character design, the protagonist's personality is quite outstanding, but as I said, I can't remember the other characters, whether it is the male supporting character who has already appeared or another soul, the impression is not particularly deep. The character I should have is not written out. Of course, this may also be related to the fact that you have written too little so far. But I think if the article wants to be outstanding, it is better to show the character in the early stage, such as the evil plot. The events surrounding the supporting characters are too short, which is one of the reasons why the character is not highlighted. Two suggestions are to either lengthen the events between the supporting characters, or to contact the heroine as early as possible and reflect the character of the supporting actor through foil. This suggestion is for the early stage and one for the later stage. There is also a problem with the agreement. The original soul of the body is not very old, so the agreement will not be so comprehensive. Therefore, it is better for the heroine to propose the agreement indirectly, and this aspect can be slightly modified. The above is my personal opinion and is for reference only. I will vote for you as soon as the recommendation vote is issued. I hope you can support me. Of course, you can also vote for each other.

Everyone is welcome to collect and support. If the writing is not good, everyone is welcome to criticize and give advice.

I added a bookshelf a long time ago, it looks great, I hope you'll update it~ Chaiwen ing

Come on (｡>ㅿ<｡)

Hahahaha, I have been reading novels since the fifth grade. I have one comment, this book is really good. Haha, I said it was the first time I wrote it. Oh my God, I can't see it at all. I love you, I love you. I will always support you.

Welcome everyone to join the group 😁

I've finished reading it. The novel is well written. The author's writing skills are very solid. The scenery at the beginning is very interesting and the atmosphere is well rendered. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗

Received, well written, well written, come on, gain weight

Two souls coexist, I'm so curious, I've adopted a baby~

Your results are amazing. You have two thousand fans as soon as you get started, and you get so many rewards.

Come on! (A passing by the salted fish and pigeon emperor who was prostituted for free)

Very well written, please like it. Save it and follow it, come on 😁. The Wanwan Moon

Don't quit, try to finish the novel when you have time, even if it's one chapter a week

(=^^=)Congratulations on finishing this book! Keep up the good work for the next one, remember to let me know!