Good Fortune Alchemist 1 Alchemist

Collected The opening chapter is great, the plot and the development of the world are well intertwined, but the connection between the previous chapters is not very good, and the ending is very abrupt, and the beginning of the next chapter is also the same. It can be slightly changed. The plot and writing are great and worth watching. Come on (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

I wrote an introduction before the main text, but a friend said he didn't see it, so I re-adjusted the first few chapters and moved the introduction into the main text for easier reading.

Already collected, I think the writing is good 😁

I will comment back, First of all, thank you to the author for your comment. Secondly, the author's writing style is very profound and the plot development is also very good Thirdly, I think I can add some character descriptions to the previous article, so that the image can be more deeply rooted in people's hearts. The above is my personal opinion~

I came back to visit again and read the book carefully. The story is quite attractive and the writing is good. However, some paragraphs are too long. I suggest you consider dividing it into sub-sections, which should attract more readers. Another: Thank you for your opinions. I have made some modifications to my article based on your opinions. I also ask for your corrections. I hope you can make more suggestions.

It's finally time to change the name. Changed its name to I am the strongest alchemist.

Am I late? Already finished? !

It's well written and enjoyable to read, but it's not very popular, which is a pity. I can let this book be seen by more readers, Wowei: yaayaa335

Hey Jiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (ω< )★