That Boy of Mine

Haha, I actually like romance. Even though I am a boy, the writing is good and it is the type I like. Youth is the most ignorant about love and love, but it is also the most yearning for it. I am also a mature person, even though I have been single for 16 years (I secretly say that I am only 16 this year). Good! Keep up the good work! I am following this book!

Cheers to the author, the writing is very good 🙂🙂🙂

Okay, come on. Youth literature is always so emotional

It looks great. Invest in a collection ticket and go for it!

I really like the big style of writing and the fairy-like touches, but I feel that there are no transitions in some places. I could use some dividing lines or something. Come on

Give you a vote, encourage me, come on

Well written! Collected! Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Great work (ง •̀_•́)ง, very well written

From the perspective of a girl's heart, it's quite unique, quite real, ignorant and young, like it 👍

A good article that resonates with people, bookmark it! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Great writing style. Good work. Come on.

It's a pretty good book, keep up the good work

To be fair, I think the author can post it on a female channel

The author's writing is very real, and the characters in the book are diverse and have distinct personalities, allowing readers to quickly feel a sense of involvement. The writing style is also very smooth, and the small details that should be described are also included, so that I can have a sense of immersion. I am looking forward to the follow-up story and compare my thoughts.

It's great, I can see the youthful ignorance I once had

Read eight chapters Advantages 1. The characters are vividly created. There are no cookie-cutter characters, they all have their own personalities and stories. 2. The plot advances very naturally. A power outage, a dream, sending bookmarks, the talented man dropping out of school, etc. Naturally draw the relationship between the protagonists closer.        1.，，， It is recommended to add more dividing lines or break chapters when they are broken - for example, Chapter 5 is actually composed of two events. You can write more scenes of them playing for a day without compressing the two chapters into one chapter (of course, if you do it deliberately, treat it as if I didn't say it.) 2. The pace feels a bit fast. Although I have only read the first eight chapters, the pace is quite good. But when I looked at the table of contents, I saw that there are more than twenty chapters in one volume, and this is true for high school and vacation. So is the focus of writing about college or society? I don't know how many words you plan to write in this book, but I think you definitely want to write more. So you can slow down a bit. This is a sweet article after all, not a passionate upgrade article. There is no need to change the map frequently. Readers don't care about staying in one scene, they just want to feel more of the sweet love between the two. The above are my trivial opinions. I hope you can adopt them if they are correct, and ignore them if they are not.