The Shield of the Heavens Does Not Harm Anyone

I couldn't stand it anymore at the end. I felt that the description of the power system was not enough and it was a bit confusing. The growth was also flat. The subject matter was still very good. I couldn't stand it for another 50 chapters and then I pulled it.

I really like the setting. Maybe it has all the shortcomings they mentioned, but I can keep watching 😁

The writing is very good, but the number of words is not enough to read! ! ! ! Come on

I really can't stand it anymore, it's just as bland as water, and there's nothing exciting about it. It would be okay if it was a story about urban life, but it's so boring in such a competitive environment, and it feels boring.

It's better to cut this one. The master next door didn't update the 13w fan, so he updated this 1.2W one.

It's very nice. Do you have any other similar ones? I'll keep this one for now.

This is a group created by the author

Available on the shelves True to speak out

These 13 pairs are open 😅

The protagonist should not keep sending everything out. Prioritize improving your upper limit of strength. . Or is it more useful to give the human race the advantage of being a leader than to give it to teammates? By the time those teammates grow up, the protagonist will have already become a god. Useful for hair.

The story is good, but the writing is poor. The story's twists and turns and the use of language are a bit rough, making the content bland, not stimulating enough for readers, and lacking in appeal. If you learn how to refine words and sentences and grasp the rhythm of excellent novels, your grades should be better. Come on, author

Why can't it become popular? For a reason, the second part is quite exciting, but unfortunately there are no three golden chapters in the first part. Many people can't hold on to the first part, so they give up decisively. Why read a book? It's cool! The various conflicts and exciting plots can attract people, such as the hatred at the beginning and the golden finger at the beginning. They can all be enjoyable. People are curious.

The divine heart of space that was just obtained will be sent out another third immediately. The elves are so much stronger than the humans, just in case the humans give them away. Directly exterminated →_→. The author could write that the elves took one-third of the reward and left. But this plot is quite poisonous.

It's strange that such a good novel is not popular!

It's ruined, isn't it? If you don't update that book, then this one.

The main character's three world leaf hairs are gone without any use →_→. It's totally made for people to wear wedding dresses. Free gift

Sending leaves is really poisonous. . Nothing was caught. It's simply a free gift. Female elves are worth more than 200,000 to 300,000 points, right? People would rather blow themselves up than use leaves. The protagonist gave away two pieces and at least 400,000 to 600,000 points. .

In the early stage, the author's handling of the brother-sister relationship felt very awkward. The younger sister felt like a parasite, insisting on going to the best school before the protagonist showed his talent. There is a saying that no matter where in the world a good school is, it must be equated with money, except for some geniuses. But the protagonist's sister knew that her brother did this because she didn't want to go to college. Of course, this is just a small aspect. Later, when the protagonist goes home for the first time and goes shopping with his sister, I don't want to say anything about the things my sister bought.

It was fine in the front, but after about 200, I started to whittle down the protagonist. I dealt with all the soul damage and so on. After playing the basics for so long, I still stayed at the third level. Although I was very strong, I felt that it was still not enough. I was still quite unhappy.

Author, rewrite it. I really like the background of the story you wrote. There are many reasons why no one has read the book. My feeling is that the main story is too bland, and the power system is too complicated. The story is mainly about fighting dungeons. I feel good about it. The power system is too complicated, and there are all kinds of situations. There are also geniuses in the human race who can fight across levels, but there are no alien beasts? There should be elites, lords and the like

. . . Go away, this author doesn't know his stuff.

The author is a eunuch, everyone should leave. I will delete the book first.

Is this a eunuch, or something else?

Brother, why are you forbidding me?

Update the author of two novels at the same time. Are you a studio?

The author can update this one after updating the previous one.

May I ask the author if this book is eunuch?

I missed the rest of the writing... What a pity this book is, alas

It's okay, but some of the turns are a bit abrupt.

There are a lot of typos. Did the author not graduate from junior high school?