Hibernation Is Harmless

The character design is interesting! Okay, great!

Some suggestions 1. I can see that I want to write a different feeling, but be careful not to use too much force. I suggest you write the complete sentence structure first. Now the narrative is a little confusing 2. There seems to be no punctuation in the dialogue?

The title of the book was well received, and it was very comfortable to read. Then I read half of the introduction, Shi Ling and Zhou Man. I was shocked and thought it was Lily, but later I found out it was not, hahaha. If nothing else, the book really writes the emotions well and is delicate enough. Come on.

"Hibernation Is Harmless" short story at 2pm tomorrow~ Recommended by popular serial column, see you there ❤️

1. The language and writing are quite good, but the structure is a bit messy (the dialogue is unclear) 2. The English name is not suitable, you are not "Dragon" 3. We are both newbies, come on ＾0＾~

The characters and expressions are well described, but does the content of the story jump too quickly? The English name looks really awkward.

The English name is Weiwei The writing style is okay. I think the character description is very distinct The details are not well controlled. I suggest you improve it Come on!

Come on! Author Jun😍😍😍

Come on, come on💪 Looking forward to the update 🌹🌹

Full of emotion and delicate writing, great support

Not bad. The writing is smooth and natural. Just pay attention to the punctuation marks. It's very good. Come on.

It's very interesting, I guess it will be popular.