The Life of a Soldier King Begins with a Soldier's Assault

Are all three views of writing nowadays so blatantly skewed? Enter the army through the back door (the protagonist himself said that he did not sign up for conscription, so he did not have a physical examination). On the first day, the recruits stepped into the military camp and immediately told them that they would be assigned to a good unit? ? ?

Can we divide it into segments? I'm so blind.

Already finished watching it. The word count is not much, but in just a few chapters, you can see the deep love for "Soldier Assault" hahaha! I just want to give you a few suggestions. You must learn to segment! Otherwise, readers will look very hard and be scared away 😌 In addition, the protagonist's character can be more clearly defined. That's all for now, please keep working hard!

Xiaobai Kanmo Dada, although it is not my favorite type... But I have collected and studied it. Come on

What do you write next? If you don't go to military school, you can't get promoted. Now officers must go to military school. Not to mention now, even in the war years, officers above the regiment commander still graduate for command training. Those above brigade commander are more strict. During the Anti-Japanese War, night schools were often held to train officers. It seems that you can't get promoted without going to night school. Even if you get promoted, you have to go to training. If you don't pass the training, don't think about getting promoted next time.

Come on, come on, come on, reading more books by other great masters will be of great help to you, come on! !

It's a TV series I've watched! Come on, collect it first and then fatten it up! Please update! (≧∇≦)/

Come on, come and check in!

The author of the senior high school party has great news for all readers. I have successfully been admitted to the five-year program of Chinese medicine at Shanghai University of Traditional Chinese Medicine. Let me share my admission notice. I wish all readers can successfully enter their ideal school

What did the author think? Chapter 7 The protagonist met Yuan Lang and called him by his name. Yuan Lang thought Gao Cheng had told him. It's done in Chapter 20. Yuan Lang raised the protagonist until he was ten years old?

It is recommended to read other authors' books, with two or three lines and a few paragraphs, and revise the previous ones, otherwise I will really be persuaded to quit!

The writing is very good, the plot develops smoothly, but the paragraphs need to be streamlined

The storyline is good. I hope to read her novel {"NickName":"Su Qimo","UserId":318104140}

I have never read military literature, but I think this one is pretty good. The pacing is okay, the writing is okay, I can't find any problems in this aspect. The characters could be more distinct. Come on!

Divide it into sections, divide it into more sections! My scalp is numb!

If you haven't been in the military before, check it out. How many new recruits can reach 400 meters? What a good guy, you can reach 10,000 meters with just one mouth. How can you play?

There is no system, just wear something woolen. In your previous life, you were a pig and you can become a dragon once you time travel. What do you think, dogs can really change**

There's not much to say, but I suggest you read the excellent works first and then start the book! Your article is too messy, there is no idea at all, you just write whatever comes to mind! I won't talk about it in sections!