Feng Zhiyan

The first-person narrative is not awkward, it is very immersive, and the whole story has a sense of narration. Although the heroine has a noble status from the beginning, she has also experienced many setbacks and has been growing. However, first-person writing still has certain limitations, which makes the conflicts appear less intense, so the work seems to be slower to develop.

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Different from the more popular refreshing articles at the moment, you can probably feel that this article should be savored from the moment you click on it. From the update to the present, this is indeed the case. After all, it is only the beginning and a lot of foreshadowing is needed. I look forward to the future development of the plot. As for the character design, I don't think we can see much at the moment. The heroine's character is actually a bit similar to that of most ordinary people. She is not a cliche Mary Sue or a so-called strong woman who grows up and transforms. It can be said to be a breath of fresh air. Maybe this kind of character is sometimes easier to impress. I can't see much else, because it's only five chapters 😂 It's clear that this story needs to be told, so I'll wait for the author's update 😁

The opening chapter is very attractive! ! !

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Sorry Ang, I said I wanted to watch and comment, but I was too busy and forgot about it. I'm really sorry >people<. (Quietly asking, you haven't canceled my book collection yet, have you? Just cancel it. That proves that you don't like it, and I won't force it.) The first is this first-person narrative. I fell in love with it at first sight. Maybe it's because I am the same~ But compared to me, your description is very detailed and you use the advantage of the first person: the sense of substitution very well, so I am willing to lose. The small chapter at the beginning has a somewhat elegant yet relaxed atmosphere. Maybe it's because I have too much imagination. To this day, I still can't forget the imaginary scene where the proud master secretly bids farewell to Miss Nan Ying. (Dumbfounded. Jpg) It was very relaxing to watch from the front. Then he suddenly braked suddenly at the back and turned into the blade factory. I love this operation. And what I love most is that after that, the writing style changes instantly from relaxed to sad emotions filling the words. I haven't finished reading this book yet, but the front part alone is enough to attract me. I will come here to make a supplementary review when I finish reading it~ (Yes, here comes another flag) Thank you for letting me meet your book. As one of the few first-person novels, I must refer to it and study it! Um.

I keep hearing some people mention "Three Golden Chapters", but I don't really understand what it means, so I just saw the third chapter for the time being. Come and leave a trace 😂 About the introduction of the book title I like your introduction very much, it is very attractive and not cumbersome. About the content The first-person narrative is really love-making. Readers will feel more immersed in the story as they follow the author's vision step by step. I also tried using first person, but I wasn't very comfortable handling scenes other than the first person perspective, so I gave up. I feel like you used the first person and perspective very well. However, in the first chapter, there is a paragraph, "Ancestor Bodhi ignored her, Feng Nanying...". This paragraph suddenly changed to the third person. Maybe you didn't notice it and didn't turn it around. Furthermore, your handling of the turning point of the conflict is quite good. It will suddenly give people unexpected effects, which is very thought-provoking, and people can't help but "jump in" 🤭 In addition, you presented the background and past events of the story in the form of dialogue between the characters, which not only explained the past clearly, but was not obtrusive. This is really worth learning. Just, I found a small flaw. There are several places where you don't have the final punctuation after you finish speaking in the character dialogue. Although it is a small detail, you should pay attention to it. About the writing style I personally feel that your writing style is really good. Whether it is the presentation of characters or the setting of the environment, the description is concise but very delicate, and the literary background is also very good. Visual inspection must be a good read. The young lady of the poetry book🤭... Generally speaking, as the author himself said, it is a slow-burning type. Although it is slow-burning, it is really interesting. The writing style feels quite grand, and it has a eloquent charm, which is very comfortable. Since I have only read the first three chapters so far, I can only mention some superficial opinions. Please Haihan🤭 happens to have investment space this month and has joined the investment group. Come on, author👍

The author is so thoughtful! Must like👍👍👍👍

Come on, the author will update more＾0＾~

Let me talk about it... Although the content of the novel is not very much at present, the author's descriptions in all aspects are very clear and detailed: the first two chapters use flashbacks and interludes to explain the background of the novel very clearly (of course, you can see that the author greatly It mainly uses these two description techniques, which quite enriches the content of the story and the personality characteristics of each character, awesome!!!) For the heroine, I still like this setting very much. Her character is lively yet calm, her imagination is strange and interesting. From the current point of view, it is possible. It will make some book friends look like they are not very powerful,,,, after all, only after being injured and frustrated can you grow, right (the background of the heroine is still here),,,, and then, the friends around the heroine are quite fun, especially the fox Chi Ze, who is so cute and cute, I look forward to it. G,,,,,,, here comes the key point I need: call the author, hurry up and update the duck,,, there are many holes to be filled up quickly (Xiu Jue, iris flowers, missing tail feathers, I remember the close-up of the red flower on the male protagonist's cuffs, hahahaha...) Come on, come on, come on! ! ! Duck duck duck! Just wait for the update.

The characters in this article are distinct, the plot rhythm is tight, the writing is smooth, and the writing is excellent. For a new author, the most outstanding thing is that the suspense is constantly laid out in the development of the plot, making people want to read on. I really love the furry fox in the article, furry things are the cutest ٩(๑^o^๑)۶ I hope the author can have one or two special characters in the article, which can make the book more unique and highlight the author's own characteristics I hope there will be more and more fans~ fighting~(*๓´╰╯`๓)♡~

Come and see you. Your writing is getting better and better. The world of Xianxia is very beautiful.

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I felt it for a while, it's okay😁, come on 🙂

I love it even more now (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡,,, the writing is as good as ever, the scenery in the book is also beautiful and fairy-like, and the plot is even more - they go to the mortal world to watch a play, the three heroines are drunk (poor Si Ye 🤭,, hahahaha), the heroine and Chi Fox skip class and fight (the key is that every time they fight and make a fool of themselves, they are caught by the hero) 😏),, all kinds of strange ideas of the heroine... Are all light and fun, ahem, although the heroine sometimes lets herself go, she is still very refreshing and domineering when punishing the female second-class people 😆😆, if you mess with me, you have to fight her back (*Ӧ)σ to attack her, so, the author, please let me continue to dominate like this ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧, Now~ At present, the author has put some sugar in it, but I feel that the heroine's feelings for the hero are still a bit complicated, and she is still "afraid" of the hero's tenderness and overtures.,,, Presumably, back then, The heroine's heart is hurt so much~~💔,,,,,,, and, my Chi Fox is hurt ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😢😢😢[fn=19 ]😢😢Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Com. Com ), and then watch him and our female gentleman have a spark of irritation,,,, did you hear it?! {"NickName":" Flower Shadow Jinghong","UserId":329592723} The author is awesome ah ah ah

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I feel that the author made the heroine look like another woman who lost herself for a man, so humble. The constant memories deepened the heroine's image of hurting herself for love. Whether in other people's world or your own world, she lives like a supporting actress. He is clearly supposed to be a god who looks down on all living beings, but he has become like this. He cannot feel the pride and dignity that a god should have. In fact, I think women should be better at protecting themselves. Only by loving themselves can they live a wonderful life. I look forward to the author's reversal in the future, allowing the heroine to become a real heroine, which will refresh my perception.

👍👍👍👍👍 I update very frequently and write very well! Love it, love it

I hope there will be a fateful return in the next chapter, just don't let the fate die ('-ωก̀)