Fighting Monsters and Upgrading Since Qin Dynasty

😂😂😂 Dou Po Cang Qiong helped Gu Xun'er kill Gu Yuan instantly. What was the operation?

Gu Xun'er, the most awesome fight I've ever seen, begs to kill Gu Yuan! I give you a hundred likes!

Why does the protagonist want to lick the protagonist of every world? You want to help such a useless protagonist like Li Xingyun, and you want to take away Lu Linxuan. Li Xingyun has seen everything, and you want to have a bad character. I'm really wondering if you can get points by disrupting the plot. Also, your points are so damn good. If you don't use them for yourself, you give them to others to help others improve their strength. But it makes me sick, holy bitch.

The author, I think you should make each paragraph shorter. You can look at novels written by other authors and see how they are divided into paragraphs. If you write such a long paragraph, many people will not want to read it, so I will give you a suggestion. But the content of your novel is still good, keep up the good work!

Well written, relaxing and casual light novel genre

You can't show off your flying thunder god skills 🤫

Da Ming, how can Er Ming change into a human without transforming? This is a little bit poisonous.

The plot feels so confusing

Write these novels. I've looked around, but can't find many. I particularly want to see it. All I want to see is one without a female protagonist.

The introduction is so mentally retarded that you don't need it.

Embarrassing, confusing your mind, right? Not rigorous at all.

The plot and rhythm are good, and the title of the book is also good. It shouldn't be this result, which is a pity.

When I saw the introduction, I thought the protagonist had traveled to the Qin Dynasty and Mingyue became a child. After reading a few chapters, it didn't look like it. Then I skipped a few chapters and read it, and then I realized that the protagonist seemed to have traveled through time again?

I always feel that it reads strangely and feels awkward. Maybe it's because the author is still new, come on!

Come on, author, we two will fight together.

Lao Tie, you are really awesome, you are really attractive, the title of the book is novel, the shuttle text plus the upgraded text =?

As for Yan Lingji, you can come out early, but don't wait until you follow Tianze to look for her.

There is still so much talk, there is no need to repeat some things, and there is no improvement at all.

What kind of fun is this writing about? Is it a big mess?

Wearing it back and forth, I saw that I was confused and felt a little confused

It looks a bit distorted and the details are a bit rough.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Stallion? If so, I won't watch it.