Be a Low-Key Genius Who Cultivates Immortality

I am also a writer, let's work together!

Let's fatten up🤫

Very well written, keep up the good work.

There's nothing toxic about it, let's work together (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, I have a shallow vision and haven't found any poisonous points. It's written well, and I won't be able to find fault with it.

A return visit from the author of "Harm the Farmers", The author gives a big boost

It's very well written. I've collected it first. I hope you'll update it very much.

The writing is very good. There is an extra stage of transformation in the realm. This needs to be taken up

Come on (*'▽'*)♪

Congratulations on signing! ✌️

The first point is the background description. There are two maps at the beginning, Baiyun Peak and Fujie. What is the name of the protagonist's force? What is the boundary of the government? Where is Baiyun Peak in the sect? Have readers been informed? The second point is the level setting. Could you tell us the stage of transformation at the beginning? What about the realm before the stage of transformation? In this context, how strong is the Transformation Stage compared to now? The third point is the narrative issue. I would like to ask the old man at the beginning why he asked the protagonist to be cautious? Why does the protagonist hide his cultivation? What are the causes and consequences? The fourth point is the connection of the plot. The beginning did not give the readers a preliminary background. The subsequent plot unfolded slightly abruptly, and many places were confused. Why are some people in this sect good with him and some not? Why is the protagonist, as a high-level disciple, not recognized by the lower-level people? Are these relationships described? The fifth point is character creation. Your protagonist's appearance and personality are not explained, just two words: boy. Please use more words and ink to make the protagonist flesh and blood. What you show me is like a paper man. Overall evaluation, the writing style is online, the writing is acceptable, and the plot connection is not enough. It is recommended that after every chapter, you go back and read your own work several times to check how it sounds when you read it. When watching, please don't substitute the plot you have already thought of, and read it with new eyes. _(:з∠)_Come on!

Returned for a visit. This work has been collected. Come on.

Come and take a look, looking forward to your new work!

The author's ideas are very smooth and his writing skills are on point. However, the background setting at the beginning is somewhat God's perspective. Immature suggestions are for reference only.

Intermittent updating is indeed addictive. This is the law of Zhenxiang. You have to cheer up. Everyone will be confused or something. It will be better to adjust the state for the time being. To be honest, your book is the first male video book I invested in, and I have watched you come along little by little. You even update more chapters and words every day than me. My motivation also comes from you, and the other female video authors I have invested in. I will update only if you update, so I also want to thank you. Sincerely, thank you! Finally, come on! 😡

Goodbye, I look forward to you writing a new article next time, and I hope you stick to it.