Tianlan's Transcript

The beginning of the story has a strong sense of immersion, and the description of the environment is excellent. I am also a freshman, but your writing is not childish at all, it is much better than mine, and the writing is delicate and appropriate to the situation 🌹 Come on 🤭

It is recommended that you use only one version of the introduction. It will be tiring for readers to pile up several of them. Come on.

Today we will add 10,000 words, divided into five chapters, updated at 8:00 in the morning, 9:30 in the evening, 8:00, 9:00 and 10:00 in the evening. Everyone is welcome to play!

Come on, you write well and you are very popular. You will have a place in the future gods.

He has a solid literary foundation. Both the scenes and character descriptions are very thorough. He naturally fits into the role. The plot is compact and smooth, and the writing is delicate and full. The personal character is well portrayed. It feels like he is acting in his true self. I admire him very much.

We are all high school seniors, cheering for the college entrance examination!

Don't get too involved in the plot, body is important

Come on!

The writing is excellent, the characters are vivid, and the literary skills must be very solid. Although I have never read this type of book, I will definitely read it just because of the writing. Come on, the author!

When I have thousands of updates, I have no readers... So it seems that when I update, no one ever reads it, but when I don't update, people come 😭 Do you think I'm a eunuch because I haven't updated for a long time...

It was only a day or two before the college entrance examination, and I actually saw the little red dot 😰 Come on＾0＾~

As an author of multi-perspective narratives, I have to say that he handled it very well. I don't read many online articles, and I may like some of the shortcomings in some online articles. It can also be seen that the writing style has a certain foundation. Come on, it is rare to see an author who has this kind of framework and writing style go hand in hand.

Fortunately, I read it, and the story unfolds slowly. The background concept is very large, and the details are well drawn, especially the place where the dog is given away. I thought it was going to be about a young girl who cleansed her family of their grievances, but then the male protagonist appeared and the whole context gradually became clear. The writing style is very good, and it can be seen that the more you write, the better it gets. Looking forward to the future direction of the article, please update!

The opening chapter is full of ideas, the visual transition is natural, and the writing is delicate. It seems to have left a lot of foreshadowing, and I look forward to the exciting follow-up. Come on, update, keep it up first.

The introduction and the paragraphs really need to be separated a bit. Is it a problem when typing... But the story is very good, anyway, please keep up the good work.

Are we going to have military training?😁