A Soul Wanders into Troubled Times

Comment on it, the writing is good and the culture is better. But this is an online writing platform, and your novel is not easy to understand. In other words, historical articles, scientific articles, and research articles all use simple methods to interpret stories for people to understand. But if it's like you, yes! I can understand it, but it takes a lot of brainpower. When everyone reads online articles, they tend to be easy and simple. If it takes a lot of brainpower, it will be difficult to make a difference unless it is a masterpiece. Of course, I will not seek to verify historical things. For novels, just read them. But when you write it like this, there is no sense of substitution, and even the picture is very blurry. And if you write like this, you will feel tired. Why not change it to modern writing? It means using modern writing to interpret history, writing about ancient times, and occasionally speaking in an ancient accent is no problem. To be honest, when I read the first chapter of the text, I couldn't even turn the page. After barely reading a few pages, I discovered that a soul traveled through time, and it turned out that it was the same ancient culture. After reading two more chapters, I couldn't read it anymore. So you have writing skills and literary talents, why not make use of them and write historical texts in modern texts, so that everyone can better absorb them. Wouldn't it be better for "you" like "you" to directly replace them with modern texts? Just like when you watch costume movies, they are all expressed in easy-to-understand terms, so that they can have more readers. Personal opinion, tell the truth, if you don't like it, just delete the post.

Hey, changed your name? I searched the bookshelf for a long time and thought I had canceled it. . Is this a suggestion from the contracted editor?

The book is not bad, keep up the good work ❤️

The subject matter is very good. Keep it up. Come on.

So boring. I've been single-player for a week, and I don't know if anyone has read what I wrote, or if anyone who has read it jumped out to criticize me. Read other people's book reviews, they are all people and they are all suggestions. My book review stands alone. Please squirt, I'm about to cry😭😭

Finally someone came to chat. Almost crying

Well written, keep up the good work and work hard together!

The author decided not to look at the data in the future, as it affects his mentality 😐 Write with peace of mind, even if it doesn't look good, he will finish it. After all, it was a wish that I had had for a long time.

The title of the book is average, the introduction is good, but unfortunately there are typos. "Good to wait" should be "good", right? The first five chapters should really be deleted. It's disgusting to have such a long preface at the beginning. No one cares about your foreshadowing! The idea is not bad, but there is a lot of nonsense and the pace is slow. There are too many characters at the beginning, which can be annoying.

Come on, it has been collected and I look forward to visiting you again!

Come on, author😃

Delete this one and the first one.

Interesting, a rare good article, I studied it and received it

Chapter 60 is over. Are you kidding me 😂😂😂