Legendary Journey to Another World

Dear book friends, I sincerely listen to your opinions! 😜😁😌

I can't stand it anymore. The author might as well just write about the game.

I signed the contract immediately, do you have any comments?

Is anyone investing in my book? Officially signed today! 😁😁🤝👍🤝

It's too bland. I saw a mysterious girl at the beginning. There's nothing mysterious about it. This word is too inappropriate to describe it. . And regardless of Grandpa, overall the logic is very confusing. Without any sense of tension and pressure, I think your outline is not good. The plot must be substantial. For example, Lord Taoyun is a hypocritical evil person, depicting two boys and girls doing evil things, and then how the protagonist uses his brain to gain benefits and avoid dangers. These can all be made up.

Dear book friends, what are your comments on this book? 🙂

Does anyone have investment reviews? 😭🙂