
Payne of Six Paths Arrives in American Comics
六道佩恩降临美漫
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- 160k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 5y ago
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- Qidian
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Payne, how can one of six be stronger? Not only does it take a lot of effort to create a clone, but also to divide chakra. After Nagato was resurrected, fighting Naruto and the Eight-Tails by himself was not like playing for fun. If he hadn't kept his own hands and cooperated with Itachi, I don't know what the final outcome of the three of them would have been!
Let's all brainstorm, if Uchiha Madara appears, what is the kaleidoscope's ability? Comment below and the author will pick two good ones. Format: Ability name: (two, four characters) Specific abilities:
Sorry, everyone
To all readers: The Taiwan College Entrance Examination is on January 22nd. I am so busy writing questions now that I am so busy writing that I have no energy to write, so I can only put it aside for a while. Sorry everyone, I am only talking now. Sincerely salute Yin Yang Yufan AD2020/12/19
Let's re-establish the Akatsuki organization in Marvel. There is no need to be too polite to the United States. The protagonist himself can build a supernatural country, because chakra can be shared with others, plus the ninjutsu given by the system. In the future, he can build an island in the Pacific using Tianzhenxing and Earth Release, and hide the island with a barrier. In the future, he can use the weighted rock technique to fly the island into space, and then steal the population of the United States. Maybe ten years later, when the president of the United States takes over, he will be surprised to find that more than half of the population of the United States has been reduced out of thin air.
I feel like it was written a little too plainly. And it's obviously written about Pain's Six Paths. It feels a bit redundant for you to add an outsider protagonist. Like Nagato, wouldn't it be nice to hide the main body in the dark? After all, Pain's Six Paths can be resurrected if he dies, but if his body dies, he is dead.
Pass by and take a dip. (^^)/
It is recommended that the author divides the paragraphs into more paragraphs, as a large number of words are lumped together and it is uncomfortable to read. In terms of writing, you are not required to be good at writing, but it should not be too bad. If you want to update, it will be fine as long as you don't supervise it and update it once a week (of course, don't ask for recommendation votes 😏)
I watched it carefully again. How should I put it? It feels like it is inevitable to meet SHIELD from the time I came into contact with Tony Stark. What is the name of this system? I didn't pay attention for a while, and then I didn't know what to say. If there was a Senju Hashirama or Uchiha Madara in the New York Battle, it would be interesting to have thousands of hands against the Chitauri spaceship coming from outside the cave. But when I think about it carefully, I feel that the hand is not long enough, or maybe it is too long. Uchiha Madara summons, complete Susanoo, and fights the spaceship through the wormhole. This scene should be very exciting, or the two protagonists can use the complete Susanoo together. It feels quite interesting to think about two giants suddenly appearing in the battle in New York City, isn't it?