Water Margin and Chao Fei's Story

Don't write it as an expository essay. Just like a running account, don't write from multiple perspectives. Writing around the pig's feet is the right way. Everyone knows the plot. How to write about the participation and change of the pig's feet, or extension is interesting. Otherwise, just watch Water Margin.

Interesting, but too short, cheers! Get the second blood!

Come on, come on, I'll change my number and invest for you

The writing is very good, Green Forest Heroes feels like rushing towards you, it is a very touching book, 👍

I'm here to invest. I am the agent of Yi Xin Xin, the author of "The Fall of the End of the World" 😁 Already invested and collected The author wants to keep working hard ✊

Is the protagonist related to Chao Gai? Collected, watch slowly, come on! Welcome to visit us again!

The book is good and very quaint. It can be divided into more chapters and it will be greatly improved.

Already submitted, collected, No. 11, Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's written like a running account, and the protagonist doesn't do much. So far, I've seen An Daoquan...

Dear author, would you like to change the paragraphs? Make the paragraph shorter.

Already collected, look back to collect Tianyelu

The first suggestion is that the paragraphs, especially the first three chapters, must be changed. Be sure to re-segment. One paragraph per person. If you start with a long paragraph, it will dissuade readers.

The investment has been made, and the author is working hard. I hope the story will be written in a broader context, and not be limited to the intrigues between the court and the green forest, but focus more on the hatred between the country and the family and the suffering of the people.