People Who Mix in Douluo

The author should never write about martial arts or martial arts as the main character, they are really poisonous and extremely poisonous.

Help Zhu Zhuqing to advance to the martial arts level, the martial soul fusion skills will no longer exist, and she can be the heroine.

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I don't know what I have written. People who are obsessed with the authorities can only tell the truth. I hope readers who still read this book will leave comments. Good or bad. It's very tiring to write on a single computer

， It doesn't look like the author doesn't have a heroine.       ，，，， If the author likes to find a heroine in the protagonist group, he hopes it will be Ning Rongrong. If Xiao Wu is the protagonist, he already thinks it is Tang San's, then Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong will be the ones. Zhu Zhuqing's words are undeniably charming, but her relationship with Dai Mubai is rather complicated. After all, the Zhu family and the Dai family have been married for generations. Breaking off the engagement is not a simple matter of breaking off the relationship. It will definitely affect the face of the Zhu family and the Dai family and they will definitely not agree. Otherwise, if either of them likes someone in the future, they will simply not get married, which will affect the rule of the Dai family. After all, the power of martial soul fusion skills is still quite powerful. So no matter how you look at it, Ning Rongrong is more suitable. The fact that the protagonist is an offensive soul warrior is better than Oscar. After cultivating the relationship in the later stage, it will be a matter of course. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion. If there are gaps in the author's outline, there is no need to adopt my suggestion.

Can you put the words in quotation marks? Looks good wrong

So far, it looks pretty good. First of all, the writing style has not been based on the original work, and some things that can be saved have been omitted. Secondly, although the protagonist has a system, he doesn't use many plug-ins, and his first soul ring is only about 520 years old. Finally, I believe that many Douluo fans will like it. The protagonist is so stupid that he kneels and licks the master. All in all, this is a good Douluo fanfic. I hope the author can write his own stuff later and not just follow the protagonist.

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Why do you always wear it? After traveling through Douluo, you will enter Novice Village. Can you not do it? It's the real Tangshan again. In the future, the records and literacy will be set up to travel through English. I'm tired of watching it and it's disgusting. The author cannot customize it. Birth point. Time of birth. Is age at birth also related to gender? Every time it was in the novice village. Sun Hao rarely makes a mistake among boys. Okay, you already have a golden finger. You put in the effort.

The two sisters Zhu Zhuqing are enough, but too many would be bad. Very well written, keep it up! Support you

It's still the original plot of Douluo. It's not easy to find someone who doesn't follow the original plot and creates his own story.

What did the author think about it? Who are the heroines?

Some people say that the introduction is different from the content, and that they are deceiving readers. Then they write the beginning. How much can you tell? I can't tell everything at the beginning. I have to write slowly. Should I tell everything from the beginning? If you speak before you have no strength, will some people believe you and some will believe you?

Who does the author intend for the heroine to be? 😏

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I've read a few chapters, the writing is easy to understand, and the introduction feels like it could be revised, I'll wait for a follow-up visit!

Work hard, I hope I can write in my own style

It's very good, but since I haven't finished reading Douluo, I'm going to make my own comment. However, the rhythm and writing are pretty good, so I hope you can keep up the good work!

Douluo Dalu animation is currently on the air, it's time to take advantage of the wave of popularity, good idea

I want to ask you, don't you like Xiao Wu? I think Xiao Qiao Tun is great with her long legs.

I think with the way Tang Hao was named, it would be unreasonable for the protagonist not to be named Mo Si.