Kendo Meibu

Now that you have two supporters, you need to work twice as hard! ! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Hurry up and write well, Oli

Come on, the writing is very good.

Received! Come on, author! Please accept each other!

The writing is good ~ the plot is compact, come on

I have collected a lot of works and encourage each other.

Just one thing: pay attention to segmenting long paragraphs! Come on!

Come on, stick to it until the book is finished 😃

First, the action. This can be seen as a quarrel. Regarding the protagonist's issue of raising the middle finger, in fact, this action only appeared at the end of the Hundred Years War between England and France. It only appeared because of the war at that time. It should not be introduced to the Ming Dynasty as a friendly exchange. Even if the protagonist stands up, others probably won't be able to understand it and may still be confused. Second, appearance description, well, try to add some words and ink to describe the protagonist's current appearance. You can choose to use the environment to set off and describe his temperament. Third, the plot, in fact, as far as my personal perception is concerned, is a bit bland, but it is also a breath of fresh air across the world. It is different from the killing and IQ battle at the beginning, it is just mediocre~ Overall, the writing is online and the plot is smooth. In the later stage, the character setting should be matched with the relevant plot, and try not to deliberately create the subsequent plot. Let it be natural and reduce the abruptness. If it feels abrupt, you can check whether the previous foreshadowing is enough. _(:з∠)_Come on!

I love this introduction, I love it, I must support a wave of martial arts

Vote (*˙˙*)☆*°, congratulations ヾ ^_^♪ is on the shelves!

Collect it, collect it. Big cheers for more updates

Collected! Nice writing! Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Accept it, thank you, author, for making progress together!

Vote~(￣▽￣~) and cheer (~￣▽￣)~!

Finally remembered to change the cover ('▿')

Vote~(￣▽￣~), congratulations on ヾ ^_^♪ signing the contract!