Soft Wind and Cold

025 First of all, let me praise you. Extra points for the author's writing, extra points for description, and extra points for plot imagination. Let's talk about the things that personally don't feel very good. One is the subject matter. Although it is a classical fairy tale, I can't see a trace of the atmosphere of classical immortality. Instead, it is a direct confrontation between immortals and demons. From this point of view, it is not suitable for this category and is suitable for cultivation civilization/fantasy cultivation (of course, personal feeling hahaha.) One is the plot advancement. The third golden chapter is a bit procrastinating. The protagonist's main mission is not obvious, making it difficult for people to follow the reading. The suspense can be released appropriately (that is, the suspense can be explained in detail). One is the paragraph. Some parts of the text are well divided, but some are still very long. Like in the first three chapters, this problem is very obvious! Proper segmentation is better. The above personal opinions should be corrected if there are any, and others should be encouraged. Cheers for the good writing!

The author's writing is very delicate and the writing style is very good. The characters in the plot can be described clearly, and it also has a very funny style. It makes people feel comfortable and happy when reading it. There may be a little bit of overlap (I forgot what it is called...) That is not too good. And the long paragraphs are a bit tiring to read. The plot is very good, but it seems a bit dragging (maybe because I only read a little bit) And every chapter title I chose is very attractive (I feel like I have a lot of shortcomings in this area), (the author chose it really well, I have to learn from it 😌) 👍👍👍 And every chapter of DaDa is very long and awesome[f n=35]👍👍 But this one really needs to be read carefully. The introduction is well written, and some of the sad plots (short stories, material) are also very powerful. Some of them shocked me, but I just felt that there were too many protagonists or female videos (I don't understand it very well). I was a little dizzy after reading it and didn't turn around. Maybe my experience is relatively low here. (I haven't read many long paragraphs) (Personal opinion, I hope Haihanha 😁😃😃) It's hard to describe without being a professional. The author was so stunned that I read it for a long time, and my head is still buzzing. . 😭😢 Anyway, it's exciting, come on! ✊✊✊👍👍

If there are people who like to read my book, you can listen to it through an audio book. It is so magical that I am embarrassed to listen to it myself. I laugh every chapter I listen to, but I can't do it anymore. It was so embarrassing that I even felt embarrassed about myself. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

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The writing style is pretty good. You don't need very good writing style to write a long fairy novel. No matter how good it is, it's nothing more than a classic. Readers just want to enjoy the plot and feel involved. Come on.

The writing and descriptions are both excellent. I think maybe the third golden chapter is a bit delayed. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. The background can be placed in the relevant introduction and directly promote the plot. Personal advice. There are a lot of long paragraphs, so splitting them doesn't seem too tiring.

The writing is good, I have collected it and keep updating. Welcome to visit again!

It's exciting, it's good-looking, I've accepted it, I've accepted it, please give it a try 😁

Great support from the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Although time has passed, there are still many people who deserve blessings. 520 Happy (Don't troll me, Chido next door asked us to come)

The writing style is very good. Although the update is slow, the number of words is large and the quality is very good. I just don't know why there are so few people. Maybe it is a good book and no one reads the series...

It is expected to be popular, so invest first and wait for the coins to come, haha

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