General's Farewell

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Jitou

Recommended as a gift, it leaves a lingering fragrance in your hands.

I don't know if anyone has seen it. If anyone has seen it, can you please leave a trace? I would like to encourage you.

Very good text, reads smoothly, keep it up ⛽

Jiangjiang is here, bringing army hot pot, Bobo chicken, dried tofu with egg, fried tofu and steamed bun soup, and snail and lion rice noodles to watch the big book and make a call while eating.

After reading two chapters, there are too many characters appearing at once, which can easily lead to confusion. I feel that if I start with the scene where General Zhenguo is executed by his entire family, it will be more suspenseful and make you want to read on. Then, you can slowly describe the causes and consequences, and the characters will slowly appear, so that you can have a familiar process. The ticket is for you, come on! Just my personal opinion, for reference only. The most important thing is to write according to your own ideas!