Donghuang Taiyi

The title of the book is Donghuang Taiyi! I thought it was the second Donghuang! It turned out not to be. I also got the Golden Crow Gang Qi Technique. I thought it was a fire cultivator? It turned out that it was a sword cultivator, not a pure sword cultivator! Not interesting!

It feels so uncomfortable to play alone! So I came over to ask a favor from my book friends. Please comment and recommend! If book friends think it's good, it's best to add it to your collection. Spider is here to thank everyone!

The family is a trap. Whenever the author kills the protagonist's family, he only needs to keep the direct ones at most. . . 😁

After reading dozens of chapters, there is almost no description of the protagonist's cultivation, the determination to fight against the sky, and the cherishment of regaining a healthy life after death are not reflected at all. My feeling is that I went to Hanshi Xiuxian Vocational and Technical College. I had fun watching my classmates being criticized by the teacher in the compulsory courses. I leisurely went to the library to read some interesting miscellaneous books. I found connections and found a part-time job. During the internship period, I was unwilling to show "hard work and hard work" in front of the leaders. . . Does the protagonist think that he is destined to become an immortal?

Isn't it Donghuang? Why doesn't the protagonist seem to feel this way at all? I can't accept that Donghuang is a monkey🐵

This book was an absolute miracle book ten years ago, but unfortunately now, the protagonist's IQ is indeed too poisonous, the supporting characters are also too poisonous, and the plot routine is too cliche. You can basically guess the general result after just reading it 😢😢😢

I feel there is something wrong with the nine-turn foundation building method. The purpose of this method is to purify the spiritual power. The pure spiritual power is left behind by dispersing the power. Then we take the elixirs and absorb the spiritual stones. Are the elixirs and spiritual stones pure? They are not pure! Wouldn't this mix pure spiritual power with impurities? This is completely different. This setting itself has problems, unless the protagonist's spiritual power is too mixed, but the protagonist's spiritual power is very good.

The protagonists watch the fight. And they were watching the Nascent Soul War, which was equivalent to a nuclear weapon. He was affected again and again and yet he didn't die. And he was always on the verge of committing suicide. I hope your book gets better and better as it gets written. There is still progress to be made.

You are still practicing your qi, even after the Nascent Soul War, you are still not dead, jumping around everywhere is really awesome!

The writing in the front is really good and interesting, but the routine becomes more obvious as you go to the back. I suggest the author re-write the outline.

Isn't this just a novice who pretends to be a cultivator and slaps in the face? I don't remember who recommended it and said it was an excellent work by mortals. Isn't this a lie?

You are actually a mortal member of the family. The most important protagonist is also a lot of pig teammates who are holding them back. The previous settings are particularly good. Later you will fall into the stereotype. It makes people have no desire to continue watching. A little suggestion.

The title of this book can still fool people, and our army retreats 🤓

A low-level monk who practices qi was so promiscuous that he gave up after reading more than 80 chapters without building a foundation.

The cultivation novel is almost turned into a palace battle drama! Really interesting

After reading the above, in general, the protagonist has an above-average IQ, but is deeply burdened by his family; there are no cheats, and his qualifications are okay, but his cultivation is low and he loves to be dissipated, so he relies on the protagonist's aura and various opportunities to survive. It's a good source of information, but it seems rather tiring.

Is it cool? I will give up without updating for a month.

I feel that the writing is okay. I haven't seen a setting similar to the one with the same natal parameters for a long time. It feels more interesting than the setting of the five elements. The author feels that it has put a lot of thought into it, but it still feels like a novice novel. The characters lack complexity. The characters at different levels feel similar. It is too easy for the protagonist to obtain chance treasures, and there is also a copy of each of the metal, wood, water, fire, earth and spiritual objects.

You basically don't need to read the rest of it. Just be a licking dog, wiping the servant's butt, and rely on the author's cheating to survive until the finale.

Really, whether a new book is good or not, you really need to click in to read it for yourself. I almost left this book because of the various comments in the comment area. After clicking in and slowly reading it, I found that this novel is indeed a slow-burning type, but there are inexplicable pleasures mixed in with the slow-burning, which makes people feel comfortable reading. I hope everyone here will not be too critical of the new book. I hope you can read it before commenting 😁

The routine is quite old, so this one is barely passable. Although it is old, it is still arranged with care, which is better than just copying it mechanically. The key is that the author, you put too much pressure on the protagonist, a group with low cultivation level, and the plot goes round and round, repeating itself in the same circle.

Vomiting blood, I really don't know how to describe this ending

I can't stand a good fairy novel written in this style.

The author writes very well, why don't the data look good?

I feel like the author should be a cute boy

School starts in September, and it seems that the author is a student. I haven't been updating for a few days. I hope I can finish it.

Separate attention and creation. You can create a group chat to relieve your worries.

The author should be the future path of the author

Introduce this book to the author. Don't jump ahead to read Chapter 9, it will be more surprising. It will blow the author's confidence. The category of cultivating immortals is really a crouching tiger and a black dragon!