Donghuang Taiyi

The title of the book is Donghuang Taiyi! I thought it was the second Donghuang! It turned out not to be. I also got the Golden Crow Gang Qi Technique. I thought it was a fire cultivator? It turned out that it was a sword cultivator, not a pure sword cultivator! Not interesting!

It feels so uncomfortable to play alone! So I came over to ask a favor from my book friends. Please comment and recommend! If book friends think it's good, it's best to add it to your collection. Spider is here to thank everyone!

The family is a trap. Whenever the author kills the protagonist's family, he only needs to keep the direct ones at most. . . 😁

After reading dozens of chapters, there is almost no description of the protagonist's cultivation, the determination to fight against the sky, and the cherishment of regaining a healthy life after death are not reflected at all. My feeling is that I went to Hanshi Xiuxian Vocational and Technical College. I had fun watching my classmates being criticized by the teacher in the compulsory courses. I leisurely went to the library to read some interesting miscellaneous books. I found connections and found a part-time job. During the internship period, I was unwilling to show "hard work and hard work" in front of the leaders. . . Does the protagonist think that he is destined to become an immortal?

Isn't it Donghuang? Why doesn't the protagonist seem to feel this way at all? I can't accept that Donghuang is a monkey🐵

This book was an absolute miracle book ten years ago, but unfortunately now, the protagonist's IQ is indeed too poisonous, the supporting characters are also too poisonous, and the plot routine is too cliche. You can basically guess the general result after just reading it 😢😢😢

I feel there is something wrong with the nine-turn foundation building method. The purpose of this method is to purify the spiritual power. The pure spiritual power is left behind by dispersing the power. Then we take the elixirs and absorb the spiritual stones. Are the elixirs and spiritual stones pure? They are not pure! Wouldn't this mix pure spiritual power with impurities? This is completely different. This setting itself has problems, unless the protagonist's spiritual power is too mixed, but the protagonist's spiritual power is very good.

The protagonists watch the fight. And they were watching the Nascent Soul War, which was equivalent to a nuclear weapon. He was affected again and again and yet he didn't die. And he was always on the verge of committing suicide. I hope your book gets better and better as it gets written. There is still progress to be made.

You are still practicing your qi, even after the Nascent Soul War, you are still not dead, jumping around everywhere is really awesome!

The writing in the front is really good and interesting, but the routine becomes more obvious as you go to the back. I suggest the author re-write the outline.