Unqualified Cultivator

The author should have a good rhythm for the whole book, and the various events should be richer and have their own characteristics. From time to time, he can dig a hole, but he must remember to fill it in and keep it in a notebook so as not to forget it. Some complicated places should be explained well so that book friends will not leave any questions.

Is there a group? When will it be built? Can gkd be used?

I think the writing is quite good. People may look alike, and the book may feel similar, but if you look closely at this book, the protagonist and supporting characters are all distinct, and the characters are likeable.

This feels like an ordinary senior brother. But the plot is different, just similar.

The pace is a bit fast. Slow it down a bit to make it easier to understand the ideas. Also, let's improve the quality of the supporting characters. Just post them in various ways, but it lacks feeling.

The word count is a bit short, and I finished it in less than ten minutes. It's a decent fairy tale. . . If it is a comment. . . Writing and technique are all fine. . It's just not sand sculptures enough. Well, I like to read sand sculptures recently, which matches my own magnetic field, because I plan to write a sand sculpture novel in my next book.

I look forward to Senior Sister Zili's dual cultivation and the magic weapon given by Master... The author will update it quickly, dig holes and fill them in quickly. Support the author greatly

Oli gives it, and the author gives it to me👍👍

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

Come on author, you can do it, Oli gives it!

Are you writing casually to practice? Tens of thousands of words and dozens of chapters are gone.