Black Bird Flying to the South Forest

Invited to review, waiting for a long time The title of the book is based on the name of the protagonist. The cover is very good, and it can be seen that a lot of thought has been put into it. The subject matter is not uncommon. Although it is an ancient saying about machinations, it is not very rigid in description and tells the story quietly. Although the writing style is not that strong, I personally like it because it will not be so tiring to read. I have no other requirements and friends who just want to watch the plot can give it a try. I hope you like my review🤭

015 I read the fourth ancient book today. First of all, let me praise you. The author's writing style is above average, and there are many subtle details. Furthermore, the characters are vivid and the plot setting is obvious in the first three chapters, which is great. Tell me about the places that I personally feel are not very good. Obviously, the writing bag is too big. I saw a book friend corrected it, but the size hasn't been changed yet? Talk about the disadvantages of too long paragraphs - difficulty in reading, dissuasion, difficulty for readers to control the plot, and too irritating language descriptions. In fact, there are not many shortcomings. After all, the word count is still small (btw it would be better to have more chapters). Change it if you have it, and encourage it if you don't. The above is my personal opinion, please update it and collect it permanently.

The writing is good. The shorter the paragraphs will be, the more comfortable the reading will be. The first three chapters have too much narration and description. It is recommended to add some dialogue to make the readers feel more involved. Come on, author.

The writing is good and gives a sense of immersion, but the first chapter is a bit short and the paragraphs are not very good. If you really don't know how to divide it, you can end it with a period and put it on another line. The main thing is to find the feeling of breaking it when it's time to break it. There's no need to rush. After writing for a long time, you will naturally have your own ideas and know how to break it. The review is finished, and I would like to recommend a good novel.

I really don't read many female videos, so I just read the first few chapters. 1. There are already more than ten characters in the show, which makes me dizzy. The complicated relationships between the characters are like reading a textbook to me. 2. Chen Xuan should be the emperor, but he has to be called King Chen. This is very awkward. 3. Since I can sign a contract, maybe I have something of my own. I don't know if all female videos are like this, but I think this intricate relationship is very confusing and tiring for readers to read. There are also various names, which I can't remember. Come on.

The introduction cover is very attractive, not to mention the smooth and smart text, which seems to have its own artistic conception. Between the stories, there is always a section of scenery description that is stunning and has highlights. Waiting for the day when the big book will be on the list.

To be honest, it's okay😁Come on

It's a pretty good book, I'll keep it and read it slowly.

Ahem, how should I put it? The author's writing skills are really strong and the use of words is really good, but each chapter is really short 😰😰😰How do you feed these hungry readers and children? I like the title of the book very much. It reminds me of "The Birds Cast Their Own Throws into the Woods" in "A Dream of Red Mansions" hahaha 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 And the author DaDa's creation of characters such as Chen Xuan, Yi Nan, and Lin Wan is indeed very good. Everyone has their own characteristics and thoughts. There will never be low-level but common problems like different characters having the same face. Overall it's really good, please keep updating ✌️✌️✌️🌹🌹

The writing is exquisite, I have collected it, keep updating, welcome to visit again!

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The writing is very good. I will definitely collect it.

Sorry, sorry. I stayed up late every day for the past two days to catch up on the design drawings.