Low Profile Tycoon

Author, your dialogue is so awkward

Write a great author, your book is fine, but it is a pity that in the entrepreneurial articles I read at the starting point, generally those who like to read rebirth should be because the readers know that the protagonist wants to succeed, so they read the fantasy of the protagonist playing in the world, or there is a cheat to know that he will succeed. So look. Think about the unknown. Usually no one watches it. It's understandable that people who read novels generally prefer a God's perspective.

Why does it feel like this book is being adapted? It feels like a TV series. This book should not be in the urban category, it should be in the realistic category

This is the same plot as a TV series I watched.

Can't even write place names? Other novels are fine, the homophonic place names are funny, like a clown

It's so boring, keeping a running account, it's so cool that it's over before it even begins.