Mr. Duan, Please Come Closer

It's well written, the writing is smooth, and the plot is compact. Worth reading.

I have been thinking a lot recently. I feel that the pace of this book is a bit fast, and the male and female protagonists are not clear enough. I also feel that the whole process is messy, but it is not delicate enough, and many points are not written out. So I decided to make a major change in the book. Because I am writing with the original intention of finishing the book, these problems must be corrected when they start to appear. Readers can also give me some suggestions and comments while reading. Thank you all!

The writing is good! The plot is well constructed too! Keep up the good work!

OK. Come on.

Not bad, I wish it was a little sweeter.

I rarely watch romance movies, but as far as I've watched, the details are relatively delicate, the dialogues are fluent, and the psychological descriptions are spot on.

The number of words in each chapter can be more, but some are not enough to read. Please update it.

There are details, the key is that the segmentation is comfortable, and the overall rhythm is good. I think it depends on how you plan the outline. Take it first and keep it.

Ahhhh, this is such a pit that makes people feel so good! The description is more delicate. If the characters can be described vividly and the readers can have a sense of involvement, that would be great. People know that it is an old joke, but they are willing to jump in! I will read it carefully and comment again later!

A very good book, please share it

Come on, author! 🤭

The psychological description is very good, it should be a sweet love story, the writing is good, and the plot seems to have a lot of stories between the two people! Although I don't really read this kind of CEO article, I think it's pretty good in big letters, and the writing style is good at the beginning. Come on big