I am coming!
Miss Fusang, I was on the newcomer list at the same time as you. When I saw your book, I thought it was quite to my liking. Later, I have been paying attention to it, and I have been reading every chapter until now, and finally I can't help but bubbling, hahaha
Rong Xi's indifferent and casual feeling is so good, which is why it attracted me at the beginning. Then I foolishly thought that Yuan Chang was the male protagonist at first, but later I discovered that Xiao Zirang was actually the male protagonist! However, maybe it's because of preconceptions, but I really think I prefer Yuan Chang. Is this considered to be on the wrong team? Hahaha. Then there is Nangong Xu. I thought he was some kind of boss at first, but I didn't expect him to be a cute little girl with a simple mind? ? Still like promises? Xu promised not to be with him yet? The young lady wrote too little, not enough to read - and the heroine's poor character is quite rare. Hua Xiangrong is a bit cute sometimes thinking about money, but I still prefer Rong Xi and Yuan Chang!
I will always pay attention to the young lady! In addition, after finishing this book, I still want to write the next one and the next one at the same time as if I have like-minded friends, right? Come on!
Arong
This is your ideal Ah Rongma~
The picture source is from the Internet, if it is infringed, it will be deleted.
Yanrong is ready to subscribe! Friends who like it, come and support it!
Why is Hua Yujiang so good? ♥ The new chapter is so exciting~awsl
Happy Dragon Boat Festival, little duck Ah Rong~
The writing is exquisite! Very well written, bookmarked! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!
OMG, what's going on with my Chu Zheng? Don't you like him at all?
1. The person problem kind of ruins the reading experience! It's so convoluted, really, that it's hard to distinguish the relationships and characters between him, her, and me without reading it word for word.
2. Some paragraphs are too long, which also ruins the reading experience.
At a glance, there are so many paragraphs of text that make your eyes dizzy. It also destroys the atmosphere of the content.
3. The narrative is smooth and organized (overall feeling), and some small places can be covered up, which is a good thing.
4. The writing style is light and interesting, and the feeling of ancient style is vivid on the paper and comes into view.
Of course, the first person "I" gives people a very strong sense of substitution, as if I am "I". It means that the reader is put into the identity of the character, which is highly stimulating to the senses.
5. The writing is good, but the story is too bland (personal opinion). The overall development of the story is too "ordinary". Can't catch the eye.
6. The characters are great, but I wish the ups and downs were bigger. Since it is all narrated in "I" and it is still an ancient novel, you can add some more beautiful sentences and words (it is recommended to add more ancient Chinese poems) from Li Qingzhao, Li Bai, and Su Shi.
There are also some sentences on the Internet. It can add color to your article and make it more appealing. You can also create your own. What if it becomes popular accidentally (//∇//)🤭
7... No more, that's all.
And don't ask me what Coca-Cola is, guess~(￣▽￣~)~
Haha, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Let's encourage each other
(As an aside, this is probably the longest book review I have written so far, and of course the other book reviews by other friends have at least two-thirds or more of this) Haha😄
I have collected the book. The writing style is very good and the writing style is very strong. Fortunately, I read it carefully. If someone hadn't called the woman A Rong, I wouldn't have noticed the "I" in the beginning. It was Hua Xiangrong. The first person and the third person were used interchangeably. I dare to write. Come on, please do it.
Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~
This male protagonist character... Doesn't anyone really like it? ? ?
The content is complex but not cluttered, the characters are distinct, the story is vivid, the details are in place, and the wording is just right. How can you not read a novel like this?
I finally have time to read it, so I'll write it before I read it.
The cover, introduction, title line and even the pen name are just perfect, full marks, beautiful and stylish.
That you didn't ask for what I asked for is so heartbreaking, haha (ಡωಡ)
Start reading slowly, and comment as you go. Comments are welcome.
Good writing, good writing, good writing! However, there are too many words in some places. It is recommended to simplify the background description so that you can understand what is being said at a glance without losing the writing style. I like to read concise and clear articles, so I hope to greatly change the complicated paragraphs.
The above personal opinions, great support~
I like this feeling of peace and tranquility, which makes people realize that ordinary life is the real ancient life. I love you so much, come on↖(^ω^)↗
Chu Zheng, Chu Zheng, Chu Zheng, important things must be said three times
Ah Rong, don't trust others easily😳
It's very well written! I thought I'd read it all in less than a day. I wanted to find an old book to read, but it turned out to be the first one. Come on! 🤭👍
The clouds are like clothes, the flowers are like faces, the spring breeze is blowing the threshold, and the dew is thick.
It's fate, keep going and look back, Xiaorong, come on
It's really beautiful. It's hard to find another book with such delicate emotions.
🙂Long time no see, there is still an update after 23 years
I am coming! Miss Fusang, I was on the newcomer list at the same time as you. When I saw your book, I thought it was quite to my liking. Later, I have been paying attention to it, and I have been reading every chapter until now, and finally I can't help but bubbling, hahaha Rong Xi's indifferent and casual feeling is so good, which is why it attracted me at the beginning. Then I foolishly thought that Yuan Chang was the male protagonist at first, but later I discovered that Xiao Zirang was actually the male protagonist! However, maybe it's because of preconceptions, but I really think I prefer Yuan Chang. Is this considered to be on the wrong team? Hahaha. Then there is Nangong Xu. I thought he was some kind of boss at first, but I didn't expect him to be a cute little girl with a simple mind? ? Still like promises? Xu promised not to be with him yet? The young lady wrote too little, not enough to read - and the heroine's poor character is quite rare. Hua Xiangrong is a bit cute sometimes thinking about money, but I still prefer Rong Xi and Yuan Chang! I will always pay attention to the young lady! In addition, after finishing this book, I still want to write the next one and the next one at the same time as if I have like-minded friends, right? Come on!
Arong
This is your ideal Ah Rongma~ The picture source is from the Internet, if it is infringed, it will be deleted.
Yanrong is ready to subscribe! Friends who like it, come and support it!
Why is Hua Yujiang so good? ♥ The new chapter is so exciting~awsl
Happy Dragon Boat Festival, little duck Ah Rong~
The writing is exquisite! Very well written, bookmarked! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!
OMG, what's going on with my Chu Zheng? Don't you like him at all?
1. The person problem kind of ruins the reading experience! It's so convoluted, really, that it's hard to distinguish the relationships and characters between him, her, and me without reading it word for word. 2. Some paragraphs are too long, which also ruins the reading experience. At a glance, there are so many paragraphs of text that make your eyes dizzy. It also destroys the atmosphere of the content. 3. The narrative is smooth and organized (overall feeling), and some small places can be covered up, which is a good thing. 4. The writing style is light and interesting, and the feeling of ancient style is vivid on the paper and comes into view. Of course, the first person "I" gives people a very strong sense of substitution, as if I am "I". It means that the reader is put into the identity of the character, which is highly stimulating to the senses. 5. The writing is good, but the story is too bland (personal opinion). The overall development of the story is too "ordinary". Can't catch the eye. 6. The characters are great, but I wish the ups and downs were bigger. Since it is all narrated in "I" and it is still an ancient novel, you can add some more beautiful sentences and words (it is recommended to add more ancient Chinese poems) from Li Qingzhao, Li Bai, and Su Shi. There are also some sentences on the Internet. It can add color to your article and make it more appealing. You can also create your own. What if it becomes popular accidentally (//∇//)🤭 7... No more, that's all. And don't ask me what Coca-Cola is, guess~(￣▽￣~)~ Haha, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Let's encourage each other (As an aside, this is probably the longest book review I have written so far, and of course the other book reviews by other friends have at least two-thirds or more of this) Haha😄
I have collected the book. The writing style is very good and the writing style is very strong. Fortunately, I read it carefully. If someone hadn't called the woman A Rong, I wouldn't have noticed the "I" in the beginning. It was Hua Xiangrong. The first person and the third person were used interchangeably. I dare to write. Come on, please do it.
Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~
This male protagonist character... Doesn't anyone really like it? ? ?
The content is complex but not cluttered, the characters are distinct, the story is vivid, the details are in place, and the wording is just right. How can you not read a novel like this?
I finally have time to read it, so I'll write it before I read it.
The cover, introduction, title line and even the pen name are just perfect, full marks, beautiful and stylish. That you didn't ask for what I asked for is so heartbreaking, haha (ಡωಡ) Start reading slowly, and comment as you go. Comments are welcome.
Good writing, good writing, good writing! However, there are too many words in some places. It is recommended to simplify the background description so that you can understand what is being said at a glance without losing the writing style. I like to read concise and clear articles, so I hope to greatly change the complicated paragraphs. The above personal opinions, great support~
I like this feeling of peace and tranquility, which makes people realize that ordinary life is the real ancient life. I love you so much, come on↖(^ω^)↗
Chu Zheng, Chu Zheng, Chu Zheng, important things must be said three times
Ah Rong, don't trust others easily😳
It's very well written! I thought I'd read it all in less than a day. I wanted to find an old book to read, but it turned out to be the first one. Come on! 🤭👍
The clouds are like clothes, the flowers are like faces, the spring breeze is blowing the threshold, and the dew is thick. It's fate, keep going and look back, Xiaorong, come on
It's really beautiful. It's hard to find another book with such delicate emotions.
🙂Long time no see, there is still an update after 23 years