The Game Between Man and God

The language and some actions are well described, but it's the first time I've seen this type of film and it feels pretty good. Keep up the good work 👍👍👍

First of all, I think the author's writing style is very good. I don't think I can achieve such an effect in the psychology of the characters. For the rest, I will briefly talk about some slight deficiencies. First of all, I think the author's writing style is very good. I think I can't achieve such an effect in the psychology of the characters. The rest I will simply talk about some slight deficiencies: First of all, I feel that the outline the author put at the beginning is a bit inappropriate, because I think you can use the background of the story or the prologue to attract readers. There is nothing wrong with telling the general plot in advance, but it will probably scare away impatient readers Secondly: I think the author is not perfect in sorting out the background and relationships of the characters. My suggestion is to adjust the writing idea, try to have a small number of characters appear in sequence in the early stage, or write the character outline yourself. These are all possible Of course, the quality of the author's book is very good, come on! I also hope that the author can read my book "One Leaf is Not Blind", and we can cheer each other on and improve.

Sorry, author. I was looking for books and you recommended them. There are too many recommended books. Plus, I don't know what I can do. I'm afraid I won't be able to fulfill my promise. I'm very sorry.

The author said that there is an update today, and he is spelling with others. 😁😁😁The author also asked me to come to the comment area to troll me, so please don't troll me. 😜😜😜

Isn't the author a bit miserable?

It's so sad, maybe I still need to grow up slowly. I originally thought I could write 1.5 Million words. . . . . . . . . . . It's probably not realistic now, even though the content has been thought out (of course, it's just a rough idea, I'll think about the detailed game rules later, but will my book have a future?)

It's very complicated and brain-burning. Readers, you can give it a try. It's really well written. I highly recommend it. Cheers to the author!

Intellectual essays are really not something that ordinary people can write. My IQ seems to be a problem 😰 (You successfully cured my old problem of seeing ten lines at a glance) 😓

I am not good at the light novel genre, but after reading two chapters, the writing is good, the imagination is big enough, and the logic is rigorous. I am a skilled writer. Come on, encourage each other.

The author's writing style is very delicate, so delicate that he can portray everyone's micro-expressions, but in fact, I feel that it would be a bit too hard to depict each expression, which makes people feel a little tired when looking at it. However, the author is still very powerful. In terms of micro-expressions, I only know how to use them, tilt my head, maybe a little nervous and lie. Pulling hair represents embarrassment and boredom. There are very few such themes nowadays. Come on, author!

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I am following your novel tonight. I don't have a recommendation ticket, so I sent 5 red envelopes to recommend your book. I hope it will have some effect.

How many words did I think it was, hahahahaha

Rest every day, rest every day, don't update properly, hahahaha

The writing is good and worth reading. Good luck to the author.

First, conception. Why do you want to tell readers your conception? You only need to put these in a Word document on your computer, and you can read them yourself. That's enough. Are you worried that no readers will read your article? Second, prologue, please write your prologue well and give readers the complete information you want to give them. As for putting the introduction completely into the prologue, why? Third, role, who is Deluo who appears in the prologue? Explained? And what about the character, appearance, clothing accessories, and exclusive personal identification description of the protagonist Yang Gu (Yang Gu?) Who appears in the later prequel? Kill, kill, kill at the beginning? ? Fourth, map, may I ask, what does the map you show me look like? Just the name of the map, and then what? Fifth, background, what kind of world do you want to give readers? When I read your book, I felt like you were just entertaining yourself and didn't consider whether readers could understand your book at all. Moreover, the preface does not match the subtitles, and the various characters that appear later are not introduced at all, just one name, no more? Gone! After that, various game rules appeared. ? ? ? What do you want to express? Even when playing chess, there are rules for playing chess and descriptions of the chess pieces. But in my opinion, your book is a mess and the story is completely incoherent. The timelines don't even line up. Sixth, paragraphs, could you please divide the paragraphs in your book into paragraphs within 4 lines, and then remove all your blank lines? Seventh, punctuation marks, please learn to use correct punctuation marks. They are really part of the article and cannot be used casually. They are punctuation marks and also represent words! It represents emotions more! Even more often, they can express a more accurate sense of emotion than words! That is, the emotional foreshadowing of the text in the early stage. Overall evaluation, the writing style is acceptable, the writing is fluent, and the plot is slightly coherent. I would like to suggest that you please remove your authorial will from the novel? The author's will should not appear in the text. There is a world in the text. Use the world in the text to tell the readers the information you want to tell them, instead of directly forcing the author himself to insert a paragraph of text that does not belong to this world for the readers to see! If you want to write an independent story, you also need some preliminary plot preparation, right? Even the simplest short story has some foreshadowing, but you showed me the foreshadowing. Maybe I can't read this kind of book. My tone is a bit harsh, I hope you can understand. It's just that I really think that you should read more other people's books, don't immerse yourself in your own world, and learn more about the advantages of others. If your book doesn't give readers a good impression, how can they continue reading it? _(:з∠)_Great efforts.

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A very imaginative book, worth recommending!

Hello, I will collect it and ask for mutual comments

After reading a few chapters, it became more and more exciting. The writing style is very good, the ideas are clear, and the various descriptions are also great. It is worth waiting for.

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Long time no see, why is it over? I wish you better and better!

I took a closer look and found that the number of words in the first few chapters was pitiful, especially since the prequel ended just after breaking 1,000 words. By the way, although the prequel is before in the timeline, the content is exactly the same. This is still a foreshadowing. Don't look at the fact that I don't have many words. When it is finished in the future, you will find that there are at least 20 foreshadowings in the 12,000 words.

When playing chess, I played chess instead of chess. This is a foreshadowing. It will appear in the plot later. In terms of settings, the protagonist will lose.

The invoicing is a bit foggy and suspenseful, but it is a little tiring to read. It gets better after the main text. Werewolf is actually quite interesting to write, but I don't know if readers will feel that spending a lot of space on the description in the opening chapter will feel a bit... Um... Not focused? But maybe the author has his own considerations, come on! Looking forward to a return visit~

It's too difficult to open two books at the same time.

For me, after opening two books, the author is truly amazing! !

Well written, good luck to the author!

From the title of the novel, "The Game Between Man and God," we can see that the main theme of the novel is about the battle of wits, in which humans rely on wisdom to defeat omnipotent gods. This kind of novel is very difficult to write. First of all, omnipotent gods are not creatures of the same latitude as us. It is difficult for the author to truly describe and design an "omnipotent" god. The gods in fantasy novels are just beings with powerful power. They are very different from being "omnipotent", so they can easily kill gods and defy heaven. But your novel is to highlight the power of gods. You cannot design a character at will and then say that he is a god and that he is omnipotent. You must use other characters to set off the power of the gods and a carefully conceived plot to show the power of the gods. If you have successfully established the image of an "omnipotent" god through powerful ideas and writing, then how to defeat him will be another big problem. I read your novel, excluding the prologue and outline, there is not much content. The plot of Werewolf is very average, and the content of the battle of wits is very simple. It didn't make me feel that it was very powerful after watching it, but after all, we are a group of children, so I didn't care. Then there is the battle between the red-haired finger and Li, which is not attractive at all. The battle system is unclear, and the causes and consequences are unclear. The thing that left me speechless the most was "I delayed it for 7 minutes and 31 seconds." Brother, is this a game? If you delay for ten minutes, the lady will be protected by the system and become invincible, right? Are you the Pope? Do you know all the church's trump cards? Knowing that the opponent has no back-up moves and no trump cards, can you win for sure if you delay for ten minutes? He must be trying his best to kill the pursuers. If he can't do it, he can delay for as long as he wants. Does he have a watch on his hand that can judge the time accurately to the second? Shouldn't the last words be said, "Sorry, I have no way to stop him, I can only buy so much time! Miss, you must be safe." Do you have to add 7 minutes and 31 seconds to ruin the atmosphere? Maybe the fact is that it only takes ten minutes for the lady to escape successfully, but you, the author, only need to know it. Do the characters in the book know it after reading the script? I don't think this is an easy time to calculate. If you give me an approximate time, I can accept that the lady will be able to escape to the kingdom of xx in xx hours, which is not the church's sphere of influence. Ten minutes? How far can you run in ten minutes? And can it be accurate to 600 seconds? Are you writing a true story? Too fake? ps: Your novel has a big plot, and it is obviously not a novel written by a novice, so I will evaluate it with a relatively high standard, which may not be comfortable.