Xianyu's Daily Struggle

After reading the first volume, I realized that Xianyu himself is not an ordinary person, he is ordinary only on the outside. Then there is the fun, which is not uninteresting. Because of the influence of the writing style, it is more suitable for daily literary lovers/newbies, or old bookworms who have fallen into the stage of aesthetic fatigue to use it excessively. Generally speaking, bookworms who are 5 or 6 years old will only read this type of book when they are in a specific (emotional) stage. This type refers to daily youth literature with a Chinese middle school background. One more thing, for older bookworms, this type is not very popular. Older salty fish may like it, but at older ages, it is difficult to experience the emotional experience of middle school, and sometimes it is quite embarrassing.

It's very true, but I read novels to escape reality, not to face reality. It made me feel a little uncomfortable.

Is this a more literary novel? If you want to experience a happy life, please move here. All that is left here is reality and mild fantasy based on reality. You can see the most false and true slice of life, from a small starting point, although it is not a description of reality, but it is close to reality. In addition, the grasp of the character's personality is a bit symbolic and impressionistic. Try to make it more complicated? Come on, author

The writing is pretty good, but it's a bit astringent and the reading experience is incoherent. Maybe the author doesn't want to write it like a running account, but there are some passages that require the reader to make up their minds while reading, which makes reading literally tiring. I hope this habit can be optimized. There is no system, but it really doesn't make sense that the protagonist doesn't have an amazing skill. A tenacious character and a high degree of self-discipline are all fine. If not, you can be the first in academic performance. It will give me a sense of immersion. Although the writing is not like a running account, the ups and downs of the plot are really light. You have been portraying Xiaoxiang as having an indifferent attitude because of what happened in junior high school. The problem is that you give readers the feeling that poor people must be hateful. Anyway, it is uncomfortable, and then the male protagonist licks her because he feels straight. Your novels have always hinted that reality is daily life. The problem is that if you really do a multiple-choice question, isn't Xiaoxiang's cousin sweet? If you want to portray the protagonist as a great teacher, I feel that the male and female protagonists are Don Quixote or a maverick pig. Live in your own spiritual world.

It's really good,

It's too slow to pick up I read about twenty chapters before I started to get into the main story. As a reading book for leisure time during work, I'm not in the mood to read it.

It feels good to bring in realistic novels.

The writing is very real, and the details and feelings between people seem to be revealed, and there will be no nonsense. It's just that you know that the public (including me) prefers writing that is better than driving, and there are a lot of harem-all-inclusive novels. Of course, I actually prefer cl and other similar dramas. Dimension, in fact, the author in the article always writes about some struggles in the novel world that are not very good in real life. He emphasizes that it is easy to offend people and may not be understood without mentioning it. However, when it is written, it feels a bit irrelevant and a bit watery. If you remove these, I think this is a perfect realistic novel.

The writing is quite good, the writing style is very good, I like it better. Looking at the first part, it seems that people feel quite comfortable and relaxed, but in the middle part, it feels a bit awkward and feels very strange. Especially the plot of helping his deskmate, the writing feels very strange and inconsistent.

I really like the male protagonist's character, and his face. Anyway, a real African chief will never meet a good-looking person in his life. Doesn't it matter? ? ?

In my personal opinion, after reading the first three pictures, you should write a sweet article. The characters are very vivid and remarkable. The plot progresses smoothly, but too many psychological activities after each person speaks will make the writing seem bloated. It would be better if it could be explained in a simple sentence. Come on.

There is no attractive point, and there are too many irrelevant characters, such as the man named Tang and the few girls surrounding him. If the subsequent plot is that the girls fall in love with each other and fall in love with the male protagonist, it will be okay. If not, it will really make people confused about the reason and significance of giving so much attention to these supporting characters. The plot is also too bland, and daily writing should be an art that relies on reality, rather than completely returning to some trivial and boring reality. Daily writing is not the same as ordinary people's diaries. In some popular daily works, the world also revolves around the protagonist. However, in this book, the redundancy of irrelevant characters has undoubtedly taken over the status and role of the protagonist. The protagonist himself is also a person with no merit except Asasi. Looking at such a protagonist, there is no sense of plot expectation and reading pleasure at all.

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I've read two chapters, it's good, I've invested in it👍

Personally, I feel this book is tasteless, tasteless and a pity to discard.

To be honest, I still don't like Ning Xiaoxiang very much. Maybe this kind of girl is not what I like. On the contrary, Li Hua's more pyrotechnics and the plot of caring about the male protagonist at the beginning made me like it more. The author has not decided on a female protagonist yet. If I would like to suggest something, she could play a role that is considerate of the male protagonist. After all, the male protagonist is so mature that it is heartbreaking, but there seems to be no one who really cares about the male protagonist (the sister is cared for, Tang is a friend, but it is the male protagonist who assists Tang, and the fat man actually cares more about the male protagonist. The other female characters either take advantage of the male protagonist, or need his assistance). The interaction between the male protagonist and Ning is not interesting, and even the female protagonist in the novel written by the male protagonist is more likable. You can have a female book friend of the same age who likes male protagonist novels, chat online first, then meet in person, and then go out during the holidays to discuss the plot, have some sweet plots, small interactions, etc. It's always been Tang's interactions with other girls which can be a bit sweet, but it's not the male protagonist who is a bit irritating. (The dog's head saves life) Every book friend also expressed his opinion. The author's idea is the most important, this is just my personal opinion.

Li Hua

I must admit that after reading half of this novel, half of the online articles from Qidian become very boring and boring.

The more I watch, the more I find that the protagonist has low self-esteem. Although the plot does not feel that the protagonist has low self-esteem, the writing style? Or do I feel that the more I read, the more I feel the protagonist has a very low self-esteem? Maybe it's the author's fault?

There are too many supporting roles, and the main character is just a wingman. It is better to write Tang as the main character. The character development is not right, and the heroine feels unlikable. I know that the author wants to portray the character, but the main character is too frustrated, and the role has become less and less. The writing was good at the beginning, but it became more and more ordinary later on. There was no gradual growth of the main character, and the emotional line also progressed slowly. The memories can be used as extras. In the main text, the main character is not as good as the supporting character, and the focus is off-center. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

The beginning and end (currently) don't feel like a novel at all. The shape of the protagonist has been lost to everyone. It is consistent with what the author said in the article. In order to cater to the public's taste, the writing style and setting were changed. At the beginning, I can deal with the male protagonist's character. I want to see how this character will deal with the trivial matters in life. I was curious because of the heroine's character. I couldn't figure out how she could interact with the protagonist. How would the author arrange it or just leave it like this? The part after the protagonist has a behavioral conflict with the heroine should be the only climax in the whole story. The protagonist finally has the opportunity to be the protagonist after so long, and then this part slowly ends without much description. Volleyball is also reasonable, "What's going on, sister?" I'm really looking forward to the question of the heroine in the next chapter. She usually smiles, is relaxed and indifferent, and then suddenly due to a misunderstanding, the heroine's "gloominess" appears for the first time in the whole story. The contrast is indeed a very cute point, but it is a pity that it is also ignored here. Later on, I started to make major changes. The writing style was no longer a literary style, and I no longer modified it after speaking before speaking. It seemed that everyone in the article suddenly became normal, and it became fluent after reading it. The protagonist has also changed. It's similar to the one you picked out with your eyes closed in the two-dimensional light novel section. The protagonist's template flavor seems to overflow the screen. (The appearance mentioned at the beginning is almost gone now. There is a high probability that the male protagonist has undergone plastic surgery but the author did not include it.) The heroine, I feel that it is better to imitate Dong Shi from Xi Shi. From the indifference at first sight, to the wariness in the middle, to the current posture of the little daughter (?), Although many things have happened in the middle, is there a possibility that the heroine has multiple personalities? This is obviously more reasonable () The addition to the bookshelf was still being updated, and it is now 7 months ago. I hope the author will have a happy life in the new year and that the troubles he encounters can be easily solved.

After watching a third of it, let me tell you my personal feelings. The author said that it is ordinary youth campus life. It is indeed very ordinary, so ordinary that it is a bit dull. It is indeed very ordinary, and it is so ordinary that it lacks a center. If it were changed into a group drama and written as a story about several young boys and girls, it would probably be better to give more words to a few boys and girls, probably. The daily life of youth in Gou Haihai is limited to the relationship between the male protagonist and the four girls of the Fukuzawa family, especially Xueli and Fuyumi. At least most of the words are on this, with some Yoko and Suzuki fairies occasionally interspersed. The emphasis is obvious, but in your case, it gives people the biggest feeling... Is this male protagonist planning to fence with the Shurangama Sutra? The daily life of youth is incomplete without a young love story, but after reading 100,000 words, there is not even a distinctive heroine. In addition, the daily life of youth is also interspersed with climaxes. From time to time, the evil girl has a sword fight. Pretending to be cool can boost the reader's mood, but with all due respect, your table tennis clip cannot be called a climax - —I would rather treat it as a popular science article Chinese-style campus is really difficult to write because it is too boring and everyone has been there. In high school life, there is no more than answering questions. It is difficult to write well. You must either create conflicts and write like a white photo album of spring things, ice and fruits, or fast forward and skip this period The above is my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

After watching the beginning, I felt it was too pretentious, which made me have the illusion that I was watching a female video.

Social people are ruthless and don't talk much.

I feel like the author has a bit of a literary problem. It is true that the truth of mortals is revealed between the lines, but novels always contain rapids in the clear waves, which are refreshing, rather than just ordinary life. They are not stories or novels, but a running account. Just like the author himself said in the article that he doesn't understand why those people like that kind of YY article, no one will really seek true ordinaryness in the virtual world. Most of them are what they long for. It is precisely because life is not satisfactory that we yearn for those wonderful stories.

Sent... The fattening was a complete failure.

It's time for the author to update emmmmm

Come on, author. As long as you can finish it, you can wait slowly. I am also a struggling student, so I can only give some random rewards to support you. I hope you don't want to be a eunuch. Write according to your ideas.

Suddenly I remembered this book, a year ago (●—●)

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