Queen, Please Go Slowly

The writing is very good. It shows that you have deep knowledge and great plot ideas. Come on, I support you.

After reading the first three chapters, the book review mentioned earlier is now here! First of all, praise me. The author has a very good foundation in ancient prose. The first three chapters seem to have both ancient charm and the ultimate smoothness of modern prose. Anyway, it is easy for me to read. In addition, the plot setting is very good. Telling the Tong family's story from the mouth of the waiter, a supporting character, is a pretty good way to deal with it. When I was watching it myself, I felt it was quite smooth and immersive, and unknowingly I became addicted to the subsequent scenes such as the husband and wife, uncle and sister-in-law quarreling, and the wife giving birth to a child. Readers have always been looking for a refreshing plot and a sense of immersion when reading books. These two points are done very well in the first three chapters. Permanent collection for updates! Really great! After that, point out some minor flaws. When Shen Guogong came to Tong's house during the starry night, he gave Tong Kewen a lesson and named several characters: so-and-so who loves to sing, and so-and-so who cooks delicious food. It is true that introducing characters here is a good way to deal with it, but too many characters make it seem confusing. (Of course it's just a small problem, maybe it's just me being too obsessive-compulsive?) Then there are references to some characters. For example, in the scene describing the quarrel between the uncle and the sister-in-law, when I mentioned the eldest sister-in-law's house, I was stunned for a while and still didn't know who this eldest sister-in-law was. Please add her name! At least it feels better to become 'the eldest sister-in-law, Mrs. Li, is now the head of the family' or something like that? Anyway, as you can see, basically good reviews 😁, the problem is just my obsessive-compulsive disorder, hahahaha, come on! As soon as it's on the shelves, call me for the first order! ! !

It has a very "ancient" flavor and a large layout. It's just that the layout is too big, which distracts the attention, and the eyeballs were stolen by passerby characters several times. The Machiavellian Suspicion is very exciting, but after thirty chapters, I feel that the follow-up is weak, and I can't get rid of the urge to see it all at the beginning.

The narrative of the story is good, and the writing style is also good. Now it's time to set up the plot to attract readers. Now dig more holes and fill them in later. Of course, don't make it too obvious, otherwise it will not increase the reading points, but make readers abandon the article. Be careful! Come on, let's encourage each other

The cover is beautiful, the introduction is excellent, and the opening chapter is very immersive. There is no reason why such a good book should not be popular. I love it 😃

Very well written, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

To be honest, it's okay😁Come on

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