Fairy Road Business Trip

Come on, let's just keep the little cute guys together for warmth.

Collect it and save more to watch together. Come on!

1 Vicious tongue: There is a lot of "nonsense", which ruins the flow of the article, and the writing is a failure The pace is a bit slow! 2. I really like your description of the environment, it has a sense of immersion. Excellent! 2. The story is a bit "light" from the current perspective, with too few highlights and not attractive enough. (I was attracted by your environment rendering) I must praise you for this. 3. The introduction is informative and interesting. It's just that I haven't seen this in the main text (it may be because I only read five or six chapters) and I look forward to the follow-up (which means I have added it to my bookshelf). 4. The writing is delicate, but the emotions are not reflected. Just do more research and learn from other books 5. Finally: Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง and encourage each other. It has advantages and a lot of disadvantages (from my perspective as a reader), thank you.

The details are well described and the storyline is great. Come on

Collected! Very well written! Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

The writing is very good, and it's not a noob. The author is well-versed in literature, but... You're not a coquettish person, you don't test the waters on the edge, you don't use your imagination to drown the crabs in the ocean of literature, and you don't hit the steering wheel in the reader's face, how can you become famous? How can you become popular without controversy? How can you become a great god if you don't rush in front of the river crab and leave it behind to pick up your kaiselu (manual funny)

This book is well written, please let me know before signing the contract. I invest.

I'm lucky enough to read it, and the writing style is amazing. It's really interesting.       ， The description of the city gate that appears at the beginning is full of imagery, and the details are also well described. Both the fighting scenes and the psychological portrayal of the characters are very detailed, but it does not make people feel boring. The background is mainly martial arts, and the protagonist is set as a person with a little cleverness but without losing great wisdom. Compared with the popular male protagonist who pretends to be B as soon as he appears, he is more likeable. I am very much looking forward to the direction of the story in the following chapters, please keep updating!