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(Reviewing after writing, there are slight spoilers,,) Hey,,, when I saw "86. Apology", I thought it was the main text because of the chapter number, but it turned out to be a real apology,,,, I voted for recommendation two times a day at the beginning,, It's normal for newcomers and new books to be read by no one, but it lacks exposure. And it's only 180,000 words. . Although it has some minor flaws, the overall quality is pretty good and not something that no one will like. . . Also, there seem to be very few readers in the light novel section. Japanese campuses might discourage people from reading fantasy? (This is also the reason why I stopped reading Japanese comics later, because when I think about it carefully, it is much thinner and more childish than good fantasy web novels.) I have read stories for more than ten years, from youth literature to animation to web novels. I quite like this one. The first chapter is fascinating. The magic circuit, eyes, interference lenses, etc. Are all well written in Cthulhu and supernatural aspects, and the protagonist's temperament is also good. The first fifty chapters are read in one go, which is great (I will read the series later). If I want to talk about shortcomings, compared to the magical part, the campus part seems too bland and even a bit boring. Especially the musical instrument department is relatively soulless (especially after the magical handed down musical instrument plot). Maybe because I don't have similar experience, I write with a sense of familiarity with anime. The writing is good, but there are some places that are not clearly written. For example, do you remember about 40 chapters? When I was there, I suddenly hinted at the umbrella, but I didn't remember what happened to the umbrella at all. . I didn't understand the setting of the abyss until the latest chapter. Oh, the larger the number, the further away from the abyss. If you ask the left hand, you will get closer to the abyss. And Chapter 85, which I remember clearly, I read it seven or eight times before I understood: it refers to a ghost (it is too far away from the previous article, and it is not easy to understand when it comes suddenly). Swan Lake and The Ugly Duckling turned out to be metaphors for Evelyn, and I thought the perspective suddenly went outside. The one who comforted the girls was Ciel (the first time I thought it was Ciel, but after I didn't understand it and then thought about it, I mistakenly thought it was a ghost. The next time I thought it was Ciel). At first I thought the ghost was going to comfort Evelin,,, (Does it count as confusing editing according to film and television? The person and perspective are not clear) It may be because when reading online articles in front of an electronic screen, I tend to be more impetuous and skittish (like mysteries, which have a consensus that they need to be read seriously, they can be written more obscurely. Otherwise, ordinary books are too obscure and people will run away...). In addition, after reading serials, I forget the details as time goes by and cannot connect them. It just needs to be written more plainly. The reason why literature is not popular in the online literature circle may be because it requires pondering. To sum up, the setting is good, and the magic monster abyss is well written. Combined with the writing style, foreshadowing arrangement, etc., The fantasy profile is very good. Occasionally the foreshadowing is buried too deep and is difficult to understand. The Japanese campus and music club on the daily side are a bit sluggish, and the symbolic Japanese manga-style classmates and campus... The tool people are too long... If the characters are vivid and no longer tool people, it should be fine if they are longer The role of sister is too vivid, making people feel that the author has the same sister hahaha. It's a little unflattering at first, but then it becomes warm as it plumps up. Maybe you can try to py it with other books? Could you please promote the book list? It's a pity not to write anymore, I really want to see the protagonist's future, but if you really don't want to write, don't force yourself, forceful melons are not sweet. . If you want to write it, then write it~

It's really beautiful🤭

By the way, did the male protagonist kill a few drunkards? They were the ones who had thrown away their shoes.

I didn't understand it after reading it. I even read it again with my brain in mind. Still don't understand.

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Dear author, how many female protagonists are there in this book? I would like to ask

Ahhhh, I just saw this book today. If the writing is good, why don't you write it again? Please let the author come back! Please, I haven't seen this type of book that interests me in a long time! Please

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~