The Travels of Shaohua Immortals

This novel is full of fairy spirit, coupled with funny elements, the writing style is quite attractive. Come on!

11 Since there are only two chapters, I cannot write it that long. I will visit again when the author updates more. Now, let me share my feelings about these two chapters. There are actually quite a few good places. The writing style is very brisk and not procrastinating, and it is actually quite enjoyable to read (since I read "Lingjian Mountain", I rarely read this kind of writing style again.) Furthermore, the scene description is great! As for the problems, there are actually not many. One of the characteristics of the brisk writing style is that it is easy to break down. I hope the author can control it~ The other is the wording. I will not give examples here, but you can read it yourself in some places. The wording is not very accurate, or it is frivolous (this is very common in this style of writing) In short, keep up the update.

The author's writing style is very delicate, and it feels like taking a strand from each of the four major classics. The character creation is very vivid and there are foreshadowings. If you can reveal this book later, come on ✊

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The last few sentences of the introduction can attract people, and the first chapter can be placed in the front with a message from the writer.

He waved his sleeves and took away a novel.

The fairy-like title of the book and the rich literary talent. Come on, the author, I am almost a fan of you😁😁

The writing is fluent, the plot is interesting, and the writing is good. Keep updating! Come on! Get better!

There are so many words, the author is so serious

The writing style is quite brisk. It would be nice if the author could think more carefully about his word choice.

There was no explanation at the beginning, and as soon as I entered the land of cultivation, I was confused (just commenting casually @_@)

Chapter 7: There are too few in the past, I have made supplements (ง •̀_•́)ง

The style is very attractive and the writing is acceptable The inner drama of the protagonist is very interesting Overall, the writing style is cheerful As for the shortcomings... The beginning feels a bit abrupt The rest is good Come on

Someone is watching! It's just that there are too many dialogues and the plot unfolds too slowly!