A Slow Journey Through the Dream Town

I think the heroine is a little sick. It's been more than a hundred years, and my experience has not increased and I am becoming more and more pretentious. Wouldn't that demon girl be killed if she had martial arts skills? And now I don't know if the heroine should not fall in love. After all, you didn't mark whether it is cp-free or not. Chapter 127 is so pretentious. Oh my god, the heroine has traveled through time for more than a hundred years. The smallest thing will make her heart pierce her heart, or she will burst into tears. Such a weak psychological endurance? And after living for more than a hundred years, you don't even have the ability to observe words and emotions. Can't you tell that others like you? You may not be able to see it, but you can't not think about it. He also often does Neptune things. I really feel that the heroine is becoming more and more pretentious. Where did the calmness in the first story go? There is also the world of Sixty, where there is so much rice. Scary. At that time, rural people could not afford fine grains. After all, there are very few people. The psychological endurance of a woman who takes the initiative is too weak. When others attack her, she will think of Jian Mingsi. Dream town has so many things. Wouldn't you be cruel? After reading several stories, I really feel like I am at my peak after my debut. The characterization and storyline of the first story are well controlled and engaging. The heroines in the next few stories are sometimes virgins and sometimes hypocritical. Yes, Our Lady can be pretentious, but it's been more than a hundred years since we've been here, have we still made any progress? And if there is space to enter, why not enrich the space? So little of anything is stored. Money aside, there was no surveillance in ancient times. It is completely possible to build space in this world to enrich the dream town. I'm struggling with some of the things that I have and I don't have. Is the force so strong just for show? This world is a good time for her to accumulate. Not only does it have force, it can also enrich space. That demon girl can completely mess with her appearance and Dantian. Let her lose the most important thing. Then the heroine can learn more knowledge. Use space to collect more useful ones. Martial arts secrets and weapons are not available in the animal and plant space. Qing Huan doesn't even dare to do anything to the heroine in the last days. Don't know how to take advantage of opportunities. He also argued with a child in his twenties, Lei Mengchen. If they unite, they will come apart. If they don't unite, they will disperse. Explain and explain. Moreover, Lei Mengchen's martial arts is so weak, how could he find out that he was practicing magic skills? Don't everyone at the scene know that the heroine is still okay? This bug is a bit big. It feels like forcing the plot, and Lei Mengchen gave the most important thing to Qing Huan, and he also likes Qing Huan. Even if he knew about the magic skills practiced by Qing Huan, he was not the kind of person who wouldn't listen to explanations. So there are bugs everywhere in the character design, especially the soul character Qing Huan, who is written as a moody old lady who has lived for more than a hundred years? It can be youthful and energetic. But it can't be like the pretentious white lotus. I was shocked. You can think more about it and write the characters well. Qing Huan can make many friends, but judging from the first story, she should be rational and cautious. A person who doesn't mind other people's business. Rather than the Holy Mother, those who are weak in endurance. It's not like Qing Huan has no strength and space, and has never killed anyone. Why is he being soft-hearted to this demon woman? A waste of effort and appearance. Wouldn't it be better to kill him then? Wouldn't it be better to go back to see the master and then travel around the continent to enrich the space and prepare for the next world? After all, I think this world should be a good world of accumulation, not a world written by the heroine like Aquaman. Qing Huan feels good walking around. Wouldn't it be good if she could learn martial arts and medical skills and become a chivalrous woman? I struggle with the issue of appearance every day without taking revenge, just being pretentious. I feel tired watching it.

Most of the comments I read on Q don't reply to me 😂 It's the end of the world, and the heroine's space still cannot accept things from the outside world. Moreover, Qing Huan has too many psychological activities, and sometimes she always gives people the feeling of a virgin. Moreover, there were really too many bugs in the 1960s. At that time, we couldn't even afford coarse food. Where can I find so much rice and white noodles? And apart from the first story where the heroine is very sensible and Buddhist, she really doesn't have the ability to return to the Holy Mother. Or maybe it's because I really don't like reading stories about raising children. And most of the ellipses in your article are full stops. It seems a bit inconsistent. If it is Qing Huan's mission to save others all the time, what about her own life? It feels too holy to be a quick traveler in a daze and take it as one's duty to save others. After all, the heroine has no outstanding abilities. Just like in the 1960s, I had to endure the strange eyes of others, and no matter how strong I was, I would be hurt. I like Qing Huan in the first story, who is rational and doesn't meddle in other people's business, and has her own life. As for other stories, I didn't read the second one because I had a child. The 60's version had a lot of bugs. The heroine really got involved in everything. Although she wanted to change the fate of others, she felt like she didn't have a sense of self in her life. I hope Qinghuan's space will be stronger. The foreshadowing of the first story seems to be that there are some water problems that have not been solved yet. It's too hard to wait for Dream Town to be awesome

In the childhood sweetheart unit, there is something really wrong with this kind of sweetheart. Only useless men can't tolerate good women. Moreover, he is having an affair with other girls and looks like the heroine has done something wrong.

The plot is quite well conceived, but the bad point is that the heroine becomes more hypocritical and artificially intelligent...

Little ball ~ please update more. For my little money ~ please update more!

I don't know when the heroine started to be a little arrogant. After reading the Zhuma unit, I started to feel that the heroine was a little stupid (maybe not just stupid). The author gave the heroine a hard blow to reduce her intelligence. The heroine is too vigilant and a little arrogant. Can't she improve her combat ability in some worlds? Even if you can't use martial arts in some worlds, you can get some weapons or things to protect yourself (such as guns, etc.), And then if you have time, quickly improve your fighting abilities (such as judo, taekwondo, Brazilian jiu-jitsu, Israeli fighting skills, Muay Thai, Kyokushin karate, Filipino stickman skills, Sanda, etc.)

Gone? ? ? I'm a little confused. Is the book finished? Is it too sudden? What happened in the end😭

Dear author, please write more and add one more chapter every day, okay? Because it's really good to read 😍. It's really not fun to read just one chapter every day 😭. I beg you to write more.

I've been too busy lately, with too many things to do! No manuscript saved either! I can only write as much as I can and post as much as I can! I will make up for it later when I have some free time!

The author writes very well! Every story is very attractive👍👍👍

Is this collection authentic? ! It's so well written and no one has read it! ! Thanks to the author, please keep updating!

After watching the first and second worlds, I found the second world interesting. The heroine is targeted and robbed, which is really realistic and made my eyes light up. In addition, the emotional scene, I think is also quite good, a bit like the heroine in "Being Jane Austen" saw the hero's home letter, and then stopped eloping with the hero. Except for that one time when they were studying together, they have never seen each other again. It's regretful, touching, and realistic. I think the second world is quite good, the heroine's character and outlook on love have changed. I haven't read the rest yet, but I think there is another one: a Western fairy tale magical world, where the heroine collects medicine, learns magic and refining medicine with other witches, and opens a magic plant medicine garden. Also, the heroine has not met any noble people in her life. I think that in every world, there will be outstanding talents, the kind of shining people, angels who can heal the heroine's heart. When I read the second story, I was still wondering whether the boy who saved people would become a being that moved the heroine. The heroine has helped change other people, so there will always be one or two people who will repay her, right? Emotions other than love.

Recommended by a netizen, the writing is interesting, I'll bookmark it first.

The author writes slowly, one chapter a day is fine. Taking care of yourself, going to bed early and taking good care of yourself is the most important thing.

Cheating money! Is this what you pay to watch a drama? If I had known what to watch, I would have seen the original version.

What many authors should learn from

I came across your article 👍 by accident. Haha, my "fast time travel" is actually slower than your "slow time travel" ~ I read the first part and it was very well written, fantasy but not divorced from reality. Read slowly.

Author, I want to ask you a question. Are you still single, so you can't write a male protagonist? I've written novels before, but I couldn't handle romance at all. . . I can't describe the feeling of love at all.

Does the author add one chapter a day?

Or it would be good to write about learning a craft in each world, like "Ingenuity". I only read the first two hundred chapters and felt that I couldn't follow it anymore. I really wanted the male protagonist to change the world. Author, come on! Being able to keep writing for so long is amazing and something to be proud of!