Moment of Ice Star

It is better to open it for reading The first chapter has been read when updating this book review Personal opinion 😃 (does not represent objective facts) The type of this book belongs to the ancient fantasy type... Maybe, the part introduced in the middle is very detailed, so detailed that it cannot be more detailed. Most people may feel a little dizzy, but it is still highly recommended! Suggestions😊 I hope the details can be simplified a little bit, just a little bit... Words to the author😁 The work is well written, support it, come on!

The first volume of the text has officially entered the final stage. The update speed will be a bit slow because the story has undergone major changes from the original draft and is expected to be completed on National Day. Thank you again for your support and love.

The text of the first volume of "The Moment of the Ice Star" is more like a palace drama in the name of fantasy, with few scenes of fighting, killing and stealing. The protagonist of the article, Bing Yan, will continue to grow over time (cultivation is only a small part), just like people in real life, experiencing hardships and becoming mature and strong. This kind of character pave the way for the second volume of Huan Day, the third volume of Eternal Night, and the fourth volume of Dawn. Originally, I planned to make the heroine a character similar to the clown in Gotham City. The first volume was the birth of the heroine's paranoid and dark character, and the second volume entered the theme. Many people say that this text is boring, unpleasant to read, not good-looking, and does not have the feeling of a refreshing text. But in my opinion, life is inherently tragic, and this story depicts my own tragic life. As for the first volume, it will probably be completed around October. If we are destined, we will meet again!

Support each other, come on, come on, come on, come on

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Come on Xiaohan🌹

It is said that literature carries the Tao, and the Tao is in the text! It is said that smoking is harmful to health, but the tobacco industry is an economic main body? ! Sad! Hateful

Come on, Xiaohan (*^ω^*)

The author is not what I want to say about you. I looked at several pictures but didn't find out, who is the protagonist? I thought I was watching a male-led film Anyway, it really confused me. What annoys me the most is that I don't know who the protagonist is in the first few chapters. Personal preference. I really can't stand it. Come here from the heroine who has no CP. I can't stand the fact that there is a guy who looks like the male protagonist in the first picture.

The writing is quite good, but some of the descriptions may be too complicated, so I couldn't help but skip it. Pay attention to paragraphs where there are many large fonts, and leave the background description that is very necessary at present. I've only read one chapter, so cheers~

Good morning~o('▽')o

Good afternoon (*^ω^*)

Good morning (*^ω^*) Come on

Happy Double Holidays (.•ω•.)ノ♡

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good, the sentences in some places do not make sense, and the context is not well connected. Come on~❤️❤️❤️

Author, you can't do this. At least get perfect attendance 🙂 This is too miserable.