Adding Brilliance to the Cake

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is excellent and the writing is smooth. The story setting is OK and the overall impression is good. Female videos are indeed different, stay tuned! It has been harvested and can be raised. Come on. Recommended votes for you.

The language is smooth and comfortable, the writing is delicate, and there are many words without dragging. The writing style also has a sense of humor, and the plot is still being read, and I haven't finished it yet!

Zhi Su said: "Yuan Xiaosu, I beg you, please give me a comment!" Yuan Xiaosu expressed helplessness, okay, okay. How can I put it this way, Zhi Su is narcissistic, lazy, stinky, and talkative, but her persistence in pursuing her dreams is the best among all of us. Although I hate to admit it, I have to admit that Zhi Su is a very talented girl. I remember when you first came to Qidian. Due to many external factors, you had to start changing your writing style, but changing your writing style was not an easy task. She asked many author friends about their shortcomings. Despite all the difficulties, Zhi Su still insisted on doing it. Fortunately, Huangtian paid off and Zhisu waited for her long-awaited voice. In this best year, I hope Zhisu will work hard, work hard to realize her dream, persist (don't hold back any more manuscripts), and get what she wants most. Finally, I want to say that it was great to meet Zhisu.

This book gives people the impression that it is durable and becomes more interesting the more you read it. The first is the writing style. I thought it was pretty ordinary at first, but after reading a few chapters, the vocabulary became gorgeous. The description of the scene, the rendering of the artistic conception, and the foil of the character's mood were all very appropriate, making it easy for people to feel immersed in the scene. Secondly, in terms of plot, the setting of plot conflicts is reasonable, but there is a vague feeling that some things have not been explained clearly. For example, why does the Qin family seem to threaten the imperial power? Is it because they are rich and powerful, or because they have a large number of soldiers? (Of course, it may be because I haven't finished reading it yet. The author explained it later and I haven't seen it yet). Apart from this, the plot is still attractive and quite rhythmic. Finally, I would like to give you a little suggestion. Regarding the issue of fragmentation, I feel that the end of one chapter and the beginning of the next chapter are not connected. Of course, not all of them are connected. Although the novel is made up of many stories connected in series, there is always one main clue. The chapters are well broken up and people can't help but read the next chapter, so keep up the good work and will continue to follow up~

I'm here to write a long review for Shasu. It's been a long time since I called Zhisu that way. Of course, this doesn't mean that Zhisu is not stupid anymore. After procrastinating for so long, "Additional Beauty on the Cake" finally came out, and Zhisu finally, finally, finally returned. It's not an easy journey. As Sha Su said, "New articles, delayed manuscripts, quit, leave, return, give up, and start again." It must be really bad to watch the partners who have worked together leave one after another, and to watch the younger generations open new books one after another while I can't do anything. I don't know how many times I have revised the same article, and my writing style and ideas are improving step by step. In fact, during the internal investment, we were all very nervous and scared. We were afraid that if we really failed, we would really break up. Fortunately, none of us gave up. The signing was successful today, but the road ahead has been long and difficult, and the future is promising.

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I don't usually read this kind of articles, so I just read the first few chapters, sorry. What I feel is that the writing is good, the plot is also novel, and the characters are not distinctive enough, but there is no need to have a shady character from the beginning, so go for it!

Happy 520, let's work hard together

Have mutual feelings. Come on, let's support each other

Well written and well thought out. Invested

I just couldn't write more than 2,500 words, and I really can't tell much of the plot. The writing is delicate and smooth, and if the plot is good, it would be a pretty perfect novel. Come on!

The writing is delicate and picturesque, waiting for updates

The writing style is very comfortable and delicate. Come on!

It's on the shelves today, please order for the first time~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Tell the truth! As a boy, I felt pretty good reading this book! Six tickets are exchanged for one extra bonus! Not a loss!

Oh my god! Your writing style is amazing◉‿◉I came here to visit you today. How did you manage to write so tastefully? My vocabulary is seriously lacking. (Ashamed) I need to work harder.